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Tinsel

A tremolo of quivering, movement of light She shimmies she shimmers like yesterday's gold ... Like a gentle soft wind on the fresh fallin' snow. Lamettas of old

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Zyrool Gifford

Date: 12/14/2024 2:23:00 AM

Beautifully done, Rose. Have a wonderful weekend my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/14/2024 10:00:00 AM

thank you for your support and comment Zyrool , stay well :)

Jay Narain

Date: 12/13/2024 10:06:00 AM

Beautiful poem.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/14/2024 10:00:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by Jay, keep well

Ink Empress

Date: 12/13/2024 5:47:00 AM

Dear rose, this is beautiful i love how descriptive as always it is, and how your words just flow so seamlessly! So much depth in what you’ve conveyed in lines such as “ She shimmies she shimmers like yesterday's gold ..“ the wordplay there is so creative too and so clever! You have an artistic way of expressing. I can feel and see through your picturesque words! Pleasure always reading your work. Hope you are doing well. Sending you light always

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/14/2024 10:00:00 AM

Your comments always make my day dearest Ink, hope your keeping well, Merry Xmas with love

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/13/2024 5:33:00 AM

Oh gosh, your similes here are profound and absolutely ethereal! Shimmering like yesterday's gold... truly beautiful, dear Rose. Your words are like pure jewels washed with stardust and flowing so gorgeously in the reader's heart. Wonderful descriptions throughout and a brilliant atmosphere you've painted here... "Lamettas of old" Ah, your diction is impeccable! Loved reading this. Sending you love & light always ~ hope you are doing well! Happy weekend ahead!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/14/2024 9:59:00 AM

Dear Hiya, you make me feel like a real poet (smile) I thank you for that, love

Jan Allison

Date: 12/13/2024 5:21:00 AM

This is absolutely delightful Vie, I've not heard the term lamettas in many a year:-) hugs Jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/14/2024 9:59:00 AM

oH dear Jan, the words we learn at our ripe old age lol, I was researching icicles and I got the info that in 1600's they used real silver but it tarnished, this they invented the icicle, thanks for reading hope your keeping well dear, Merry Christmas from my heart