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Tinsel






A tremolo of quivering,
movement of light 
She shimmies she shimmers 
like yesterday's gold ...
Like a gentle soft wind 
on the fresh fallin' snow. 
Lamettas of old

appreciationchristmasfree verse

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Zyrool Gifford

December 14, 2024 at 2:23 AM

Beautifully done, Rose. Have a wonderful weekend my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose

December 14, 2024 at 10:00 AM

thank you for your support and comment Zyrool , stay well :)

Jay Narain

December 13, 2024 at 10:06 AM

Beautiful poem.

Mystic Rose Rose

December 14, 2024 at 10:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by Jay, keep well

Ink Empress

December 13, 2024 at 5:47 AM

Dear rose, this is beautiful i love how descriptive as always it is, and how your words just flow so seamlessly! So much depth in what you’ve conveyed in lines such as “ She shimmies she shimmers like yesterday's gold ..“ the wordplay there is so creative too and so clever! You have an artistic way of expressing. I can feel and see through your picturesque words! Pleasure always reading your work. Hope you are doing well. Sending you light always

Mystic Rose Rose

December 14, 2024 at 10:00 AM

Your comments always make my day dearest Ink, hope your keeping well, Merry Xmas with love

Hiya Sharma

December 13, 2024 at 5:33 AM

Oh gosh, your similes here are profound and absolutely ethereal! Shimmering like yesterday's gold... truly beautiful, dear Rose. Your words are like pure jewels washed with stardust and flowing so gorgeously in the reader's heart. Wonderful descriptions throughout and a brilliant atmosphere you've painted here... "Lamettas of old" Ah, your diction is impeccable! Loved reading this. Sending you love & light always ~ hope you are doing well! Happy weekend ahead!

Mystic Rose Rose

December 14, 2024 at 9:59 AM

Dear Hiya, you make me feel like a real poet (smile) I thank you for that, love

Jan Allison

December 13, 2024 at 5:21 AM

This is absolutely delightful Vie, I've not heard the term lamettas in many a year:-) hugs Jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose

December 14, 2024 at 9:59 AM

oH dear Jan, the words we learn at our ripe old age lol, I was researching icicles and I got the info that in 1600's they used real silver but it tarnished, this they invented the icicle, thanks for reading hope your keeping well dear, Merry Christmas from my heart

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