Russell Sivey Poet Choka

Timidly

Grace loves not timid
When coming from hard sections
Living alongside peaceful
Arguments, timid
The world view keeps the water
Down to heartfelt realms under
Below the timid
Prospective leanings project
Grown aspects of love implied
Timidly, alone
She doesn’t know the real truth
Like the wind, harbors the hope

Russell Sivey

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Jesse Zerlaut October 18, 2017 at 8:56 AM Love this poem, well wrote Russell!

Arthur Vaso September 24, 2017 at 12:15 AM Like Andrea, that last line says it all, I liked how this was so soft and subtle.

Patricia Cresswell September 23, 2017 at 9:05 PM Russell this was written in the ink gf gentleness.

Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2017 at 5:29 PM Very nice, and I love how you ended it . The last line is superb.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 22, 2017 at 1:06 PM Charming pen Russell. I relate to her. Bless xomo!

Alexis Y. September 22, 2017 at 10:46 AM Hi Russel, This is a well written "Choka" with good thoughts to ponder. I agree with Vijay, great ending:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit September 22, 2017 at 6:28 AM deep in thought--love the ending!!