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Timidly

Grace loves not timid
When coming from hard sections
Living alongside peaceful
Arguments, timid
The world view keeps the water
Down to heartfelt realms under
Below the timid
Prospective leanings project
Grown aspects of love implied
Timidly, alone
She doesn’t know the real truth
Like the wind, harbors the hope

Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/18/2017 8:56:00 AM
Love this poem, well wrote Russell!
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Date: 9/24/2017 12:15:00 AM
Like Andrea, that last line says it all, I liked how this was so soft and subtle.
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Date: 9/23/2017 9:05:00 PM
Russell this was written in the ink gf gentleness.
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Date: 9/22/2017 5:29:00 PM
Very nice, and I love how you ended it . The last line is superb.
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Date: 9/22/2017 1:06:00 PM
Charming pen Russell. I relate to her. Bless xomo!
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Date: 9/22/2017 10:46:00 AM
Hi Russel, This is a well written "Choka" with good thoughts to ponder. I agree with Vijay, great ending:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/22/2017 6:28:00 AM
deep in thought--love the ending!!
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