Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

Timid Timmy Dormouse

Timid Timmy dormouse had a lovely home
But he was so sad and lonely; he didn’t want to be alone
He did some spring-cleaning so the house was really neat
He went and brought some nuts and some tasty things to eat
Put up a lovely poster inviting people to tea
Thought it was a good thing to stop him being so lonely
Visitors from far and wide came knocking at his door
Timmy was so happy he’d never had good friends before
He saw the cutest little dormouse in her pretty dress
Stood out like a shining star, he fell in love I do confess
Now Timmy and his ladylove have set up home together
Happy and so much in love, together forever and ever 

Jan Allison 16th July 2014
Written for Animals Alive Contest.... but withdrawn in favour of Poor Peter Penguin Poem

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Jack Clark July 19, 2014 at 4:49 AM My goodness, Jan ... you're on a roll! Keep it goin' ... I'm enjoying these immensely!! Jack C Jan Allison July 19, 2014 at 5:00 AM I wrote 3 whilst sitting in a pub waiting for the music to start LOL the final one was Tommy tortoise:-) thanks for the lovely comment. Hugs Jan xx

Jslambert Mister Roboto July 17, 2014 at 5:27 PM playful little rhyming write which I hope does well. Keep your head up poetess! Keep the pen Alive, no matter who is there by your side... Jan Allison July 17, 2014 at 5:31 PM You too JS and thanks for the lovely comment:-) Jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux July 17, 2014 at 8:59 AM I think you will do very well Jan. Jan Allison July 17, 2014 at 3:58 PM Thanks Richard I have entered the penguin one now posted my poem on Tommy tortoise - the final one in the trilogy. Hugs jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux July 17, 2014 at 8:39 AM This is so sweet, I have to admit though, I'm a bit more partial to the penguin piece but they are both fantastic. Jan Allison July 17, 2014 at 8:43 AM Ok I will go with the penguin one.... I have written one about a tortoise too better not post that or I will be in even more of a quandary Richard, but I have to admit I adore penguins so i will go with that one now:-) Hugs jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2014 at 11:40 PM ahhh, so cute. I like the way you told this little tale. It was short enough to be very interesting for me!! Jan Allison July 17, 2014 at 5:33 AM Thanks Andrea for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith July 16, 2014 at 6:38 PM Jan this is so awesome I love it sweetheart...To be in love the perfect ending...hugs Tim Jan Allison July 16, 2014 at 11:04 PM Thanks so much Tim I so appreciate your comments:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance July 16, 2014 at 6:25 PM Oh this is spectacular Jan, I wish I could bring you here and have you read these stories to Abby you are such a great story teller!!! loved this lady!! :) Jan Allison July 16, 2014 at 6:30 PM I love reading out loud to the classes at school so that would be my pleasure Casarah. But you my friend write excellent stories too - i just wish i had written when David was small I have only discovered poetry writing since February this year and having SO much fun! hugs as ever Jan xx i wrote 2 more animal poems for the contest tonight - wasn't sure which one to enter LOL - was sitting in the pub waiting for the music to start and got inspired as you do.