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Timid Timmy Dormouse

Timid Timmy dormouse had a lovely home But he was so sad and lonely; he didn’t want to be alone He did some spring-cleaning so the house was really neat He went and brought some nuts and some tasty things to eat Put up a lovely poster inviting people to tea Thought it was a good thing to stop him being so lonely Visitors from far and wide came knocking at his door Timmy was so happy he’d never had good friends before He saw the cutest little dormouse in her pretty dress Stood out like a shining star, he fell in love I do confess Now Timmy and his ladylove have set up home together Happy and so much in love, together forever and ever Jan Allison 16th July 2014 Written for Animals Alive Contest.... but withdrawn in favour of Poor Peter Penguin Poem

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Jack Clark

Date: 7/19/2014 4:49:00 AM

My goodness, Jan ... you're on a roll! Keep it goin' ... I'm enjoying these immensely!! Jack C

Jan Allison
Date: 7/19/2014 5:00:00 AM

I wrote 3 whilst sitting in a pub waiting for the music to start LOL the final one was Tommy tortoise:-) thanks for the lovely comment. Hugs Jan xx

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/17/2014 5:27:00 PM

playful little rhyming write which I hope does well. Keep your head up poetess! Keep the pen Alive, no matter who is there by your side...

Jan Allison
Date: 7/17/2014 5:31:00 PM

You too JS and thanks for the lovely comment:-) Jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/17/2014 8:59:00 AM

I think you will do very well Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/17/2014 3:58:00 PM

Thanks Richard I have entered the penguin one now posted my poem on Tommy tortoise - the final one in the trilogy. Hugs jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/17/2014 8:39:00 AM

This is so sweet, I have to admit though, I'm a bit more partial to the penguin piece but they are both fantastic.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/17/2014 8:43:00 AM

Ok I will go with the penguin one.... I have written one about a tortoise too better not post that or I will be in even more of a quandary Richard, but I have to admit I adore penguins so i will go with that one now:-) Hugs jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2014 11:40:00 PM

ahhh, so cute. I like the way you told this little tale. It was short enough to be very interesting for me!!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/17/2014 5:33:00 AM

Thanks Andrea for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 7/16/2014 6:38:00 PM

Jan this is so awesome I love it sweetheart...To be in love the perfect ending...hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 7/16/2014 11:04:00 PM

Thanks so much Tim I so appreciate your comments:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/16/2014 6:25:00 PM

Oh this is spectacular Jan, I wish I could bring you here and have you read these stories to Abby you are such a great story teller!!! loved this lady!! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/16/2014 6:30:00 PM

I love reading out loud to the classes at school so that would be my pleasure Casarah. But you my friend write excellent stories too - i just wish i had written when David was small I have only discovered poetry writing since February this year and having SO much fun! hugs as ever Jan xx i wrote 2 more animal poems for the contest tonight - wasn't sure which one to enter LOL - was sitting in the pub waiting for the music to start and got inspired as you do.