Timeworn

honeybee sucks dry a flower of its nectar as time wither life
~07/01/15 Traditional Haiku #2 contest Shadow Hamilton
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Nunez Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 8:06 AM
Lovely haiku. Congrats Abdul
Wigley Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 11:44 PM
Lovely, depp Haiku. Congratulations, Abdul. Regards, Viv
A. Sharma Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 11:06 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning haiku Abdul!
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 10:40 PM
Congrats to you, Abdul. Nice seeing this one again.
Carter Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 7:32 PM
Congrats on you win!
Roper Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 6:30 PM
Nice write, Abdul, congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve
Hamilton Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 6:23 PM
nice imagery the first two lines are great Abdul congrats on placing hugs
A  Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 6:00 PM
Abdul, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
Dietrich Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 11:32 PM
oh yes, I LIKE this . Very haiku-ish!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 7:00 PM
I think Shadow will approve. Great haiku!
Mandani Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 11:42 AM
Thanks Richard. You are a true pal.
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