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all he did was dream
   dreams are plans that have no wheels
   what a waste of time

timesenryu

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Agnes Krampe

April 9, 2018 at 6:44 PM

"Plans that have no wheels" - that's genius. But I still think dreams are a great thing, even those without wheels.

Jan Allison

April 8, 2018 at 10:41 AM

Pointless taking time dreaming as nothing happens in life if we don't make it happen Mr viv. Great senryu:-) hugs Jan xx

FJ Thomas

March 25, 2018 at 8:06 PM

Ahh but my dreams are so much more interesting than life Viv. But still, you speak truth :)

James Inman

March 25, 2018 at 7:51 AM

You've described me beautifully.

Andrea Dietrich

March 22, 2018 at 8:00 PM

I love that saying: plans that have no wheels. Wish I could think up stuff like that!!

Viv Wigley

March 21, 2018 at 2:53 AM

Thanks Carole. This is about a pal of mine who is going nowhere, moans about his life, gets depressed and does nothing about it. And there are people with fulfilling lives dying in car accidents every day. It makes me so angry. Viv x