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all he did was dream dreams are plans that have no wheels what a waste of time

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Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/9/2018 6:44:00 PM

"Plans that have no wheels" - that's genius. But I still think dreams are a great thing, even those without wheels.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/8/2018 10:41:00 AM

Pointless taking time dreaming as nothing happens in life if we don't make it happen Mr viv. Great senryu:-) hugs Jan xx

Fj Thomas

Date: 3/25/2018 8:06:00 PM

Ahh but my dreams are so much more interesting than life Viv. But still, you speak truth :)

James Inman

Date: 3/25/2018 7:51:00 AM

You've described me beautifully.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2018 8:00:00 PM

I love that saying: plans that have no wheels. Wish I could think up stuff like that!!

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/21/2018 2:53:00 AM

Thanks Carole. This is about a pal of mine who is going nowhere, moans about his life, gets depressed and does nothing about it. And there are people with fulfilling lives dying in car accidents every day. It makes me so angry. Viv x

Carole Duet

Date: 3/20/2018 1:18:00 PM

Sounds like my ex! lol Great senryu.

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/21/2018 2:54:00 AM

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/20/2018 12:30:00 PM

Lol! Awesome :)

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/21/2018 2:54:00 AM

Thanks Maureen. People who wish for 'life changing, happy fairy' to sprinkle stardust on them are usually very disappointed. Viv x

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/20/2018 2:52:00 AM

How true Viv, like you say ,too much time spent on thinking rather than doing. Tom

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/21/2018 2:55:00 AM

'Action this day!' said Churchill. Thanks Tom. Regards, Viv

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/19/2018 10:04:00 PM

Very clever. Love it, Viv. Dreams without action are futile.

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/21/2018 2:55:00 AM

Indeedy, Line, it's a big bad beautiful world out there, we should grasp it with both arms x