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the air the leaves the breeze the tears unheeded and carried off by the currents time stands still but you move on can't see what is unseen but you believe in it anyways air freezing asking me to feel nothing is like telling me not to breathe the air chilling from the start behind that smiling face is a tortured soul who have found the strength to smile again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/9/2011 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Karima. Love Carol
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Karima. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/20/2010 6:50:00 AM
Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Karima. Thank you for sharing it with us. Love, Carol
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