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" TIME'S FULFILLMENT " FROM MY ROOF GARDEN , MY PHOTO, ©

Time's Mission

A fruit is ripen

A man has acquired wisdom

Fulfillment of time!






© Demetrios Trifiatis
       29 May 2018

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/30/2018 5:34:00 PM

Sadly some men pick from the wrong tree. This piece is good to ponder Demetrios.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/29/2018 3:14:00 PM

Wisdom is the best fruit, dear...and you have plenty of that. :)

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/29/2018 10:35:00 AM

Experience... a profound haiku!

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/29/2018 9:06:00 AM

Very nice Demetrios! To live a fulfilling life , making the most with the time we have :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/29/2018 6:16:00 AM

Gift of time and patience..enjoy the harvest my friend--you earned it..lovely poem Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/29/2018 6:46:00 AM

Well I think I am doing something that nature doesn't object and do it on a roof garden in the middle of Athens! Thank you dearest friend, Vijay!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/29/2018 3:51:00 AM

- I have planted many tomato plants ... but my plants are only 10 cenimers :))) - Lovely haiku, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/29/2018 5:50:00 AM

I wish I could have more tomatoes planted but tomatoes need a lot of soil which I cannot have in a small pot! Thank you for your precious comment my friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/29/2018 3:39:00 AM

Excellent. Wise haiku with well penned. Thanks for sharing it

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/29/2018 5:48:00 AM

Good to see you my friend, Ravi! Thank you for wonderful comment!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/29/2018 2:47:00 AM

We think back to our youth and where we are today and realise with the passage of time how wiser we have become. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/29/2018 5:46:00 AM

You are right my friend, Tom. That way we see the work time has performed! Thank you very much!

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/29/2018 1:48:00 AM

Age, I adore and venerate! We are brought to maturity through time.. We acquire new ideas and skills.. new experiences.. a deeper understanding of ourselves and of the world.. We learn and know more throughout the years.. A journey of inestimable growth and insight.. Profound write! A brilliantly penned Haiku! Thank you for sharing dear Demetrios. Stay safe and blessed.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/29/2018 5:45:00 AM

Another brilliant analysis that sheds further light! Thank you dearest, Besma! Be blessed my friend! Thank you!

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