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" TIME'S FULFILLMENT " FROM MY ROOF GARDEN , MY PHOTO, ©

Time's Mission

A fruit is ripen

A man has acquired wisdom

Fulfillment of time!






© Demetrios Trifiatis
       29 May 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lamoureux Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 5:34 PM
Sadly some men pick from the wrong tree. This piece is good to ponder Demetrios.
Manassian Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 3:14 PM
Wisdom is the best fruit, dear...and you have plenty of that. :)
Gentry Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Experience... a profound haiku!
Sands Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 9:06 AM
Very nice Demetrios! To live a fulfilling life , making the most with the time we have :)
Pandit Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 6:16 AM
Gift of time and patience..enjoy the harvest my friend--you earned it..lovely poem Demetrios.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 6:46 AM
Well I think I am doing something that nature doesn't object and do it on a roof garden in the middle of Athens! Thank you dearest friend, Vijay!
Andresen Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 3:51 AM
- I have planted many tomato plants ... but my plants are only 10 cenimers :))) - Lovely haiku, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 5:50 AM
I wish I could have more tomatoes planted but tomatoes need a lot of soil which I cannot have in a small pot! Thank you for your precious comment my friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx
Sathasivam Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 3:39 AM
Excellent. Wise haiku with well penned. Thanks for sharing it
Trifiatis Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 5:48 AM
Good to see you my friend, Ravi! Thank you for wonderful comment!
Cunningham Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 2:47 AM
We think back to our youth and where we are today and realise with the passage of time how wiser we have become. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 5:46 AM
You are right my friend, Tom. That way we see the work time has performed! Thank you very much!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 1:48 AM
Age, I adore and venerate! We are brought to maturity through time.. We acquire new ideas and skills.. new experiences.. a deeper understanding of ourselves and of the world.. We learn and know more throughout the years.. A journey of inestimable growth and insight.. Profound write! A brilliantly penned Haiku! Thank you for sharing dear Demetrios. Stay safe and blessed.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 5:45 AM
Another brilliant analysis that sheds further light! Thank you dearest, Besma! Be blessed my friend! Thank you!
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