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Times Like These

I can Look at Your form while you stand But i need to stare at That beautiful man If only there was a way For me to never Stay away From this never ending lover I could hold him so tight He would know this is it The kind of love thats right & one you'll never miss Its when he rattles In the back seat of his car: "I just stopped wishin' on my candles 'Cs your my Shooting Star" Its like he rocked me out This melting heart that the heat Till the sun shout: "Dont skip a beat" And then I die Over & over again But then I rise To see my heart's one Fan And he gazes Down at a sight And Im wishing on fate That I look alright

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/23/2009 3:52:00 AM
Awesome Girl. Your Poems Are So Unique. They Cary A Part Of You In Them Which Is So Visible <3
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Date: 6/19/2009 11:07:00 AM
all the poem that i read was good and had alot of feelings keep it up
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Date: 6/17/2009 2:30:00 PM
Sounds like "the kind of love that's right" to me, Sajdah! Very passionate write that I read several times just for the pleasure all the images provide. Love, Carolyn
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