Times Like These

I can Look at
Your form while you stand
But i need to stare at
That beautiful man

If only there was a way
For me to never
Stay away
From this never ending lover

I could hold him so tight
He would know this is it
The kind of love thats right
& one you'll never miss

Its when he rattles
In the back seat of his car:
"I just stopped wishin' on my candles
'Cs your my Shooting Star"

Its like he rocked me out
This melting heart that the heat
Till the sun shout:
"Dont skip a beat"

And then I die
Over & over again
But then I rise
To see my heart's one Fan

And he gazes
Down at a sight
And Im wishing on fate
That I look alright
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loveless Avatar
June 23, 2009 at 3:52 AM
Awesome Girl. Your Poems Are So Unique. They Cary A Part Of You In Them Which Is So Visible <3
Bess Avatar
June 19, 2009 at 11:07 AM
all the poem that i read was good and had alot of feelings keep it up
Devonshire Avatar
June 17, 2009 at 2:30 PM
Sounds like "the kind of love that's right" to me, Sajdah! Very passionate write that I read several times just for the pleasure all the images provide. Love, Carolyn
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