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Time's End

As time defies thought of betterment and wishes We struggle, as an uphill battle ensues for cause Standing face to face with time, it certainly wins But, the battle won’s no indication of the war itself As heart remains, as will is strong, as goodness exists We will remain triumphant in the war on time For what missions go unfulfilled, we pass the baton To the next generation of soldiers of right and light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/3/2008 11:57:00 AM
a beautiful and gentel piece of great poetry.
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Date: 8/31/2008 3:20:00 PM
when without the sun and light does shine only with this will there be no time when we live with the Lord and His good Grace we shall live forever in this great place John H. Loving III
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Date: 8/30/2008 2:55:00 PM
Michael - Time is like a endless cup that just seems to forever pour - Thing is the longer it pours the faster it flows - God bless
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Date: 8/30/2008 2:32:00 PM
hi Michael, time stands still for no one, that's why we each have to teach or children the right way to go, and the right things to do, great introspective write, and thanks for your welcome comments, take care D-nyce
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Date: 8/30/2008 9:09:00 AM
Yes, but I believe that time is but a word made for the purpose of working and having to be somewhere, at a specific when...time is all now...there is no tomorrow or yesterday, it is all just now. So, in that respect, yes, our children will one day take over and on and on it goes...a beautiful poem, Michael, you get better each day. :) Love Kristin
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