Juliet Ligon Poet Verse

Timeline Tableau

pleated mountains peaks
     clockwork waterfalls
       chiseled crevices
  pressure etched artwork
      cascading timeline
         gliding the dial

3-25-2021
Tableau - 6 Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May

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Gershon Wolf March 26, 2021 at 2:37 PM Back with congrats on your well deserved win in the contest, Juliet. Best always, Gershon

Alexis Y. March 26, 2021 at 1:44 PM Hi Juliet, You've penned a good description write with stunning imagery. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Joseph May March 26, 2021 at 1:19 PM Wonderful write Juliet, Congrats on your win..

Sam Kauffman March 26, 2021 at 11:36 AM Your images and imagery are always so creative and stand out in their unique ability to create a picture, Juliet. Love the movement created by your choice of strong verbs! Congratulations on your win! Really enjoyed this!

Andrea Dietrich March 26, 2021 at 9:25 AM Your lines are really nice, like a short free verse and unique imagery. Congrats in the contest.

Gershon Wolf March 25, 2021 at 8:22 PM I just love the downward pressure in this timeline, and then how it eases off and glides away so smoothly at the end. Very pretty poetry, Juliet! :) gw Juliet Ligon March 25, 2021 at 9:31 PM Thanks, Gershon. Welcome back!

Jan Allison March 25, 2021 at 2:01 PM exceptional imagery I especially love the clockwork waterfalls line:-) hugs Jan xx Juliet Ligon March 25, 2021 at 8:03 PM Thanks, Jan. I was having trouble figuring out how to convert the format to add a picture.