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Timeline Tableau

pleated mountains peaks clockwork waterfalls chiseled crevices pressure etched artwork cascading timeline gliding the dial 3-25-2021 Tableau - 6 Lines Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/26/2021 2:37:00 PM

Back with congrats on your well deserved win in the contest, Juliet. Best always, Gershon

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/26/2021 1:44:00 PM

Hi Juliet, You've penned a good description write with stunning imagery. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Joseph May

Date: 3/26/2021 1:19:00 PM

Wonderful write Juliet, Congrats on your win..

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/26/2021 11:36:00 AM

Your images and imagery are always so creative and stand out in their unique ability to create a picture, Juliet. Love the movement created by your choice of strong verbs! Congratulations on your win! Really enjoyed this!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2021 9:25:00 AM

Your lines are really nice, like a short free verse and unique imagery. Congrats in the contest.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/25/2021 8:22:00 PM

I just love the downward pressure in this timeline, and then how it eases off and glides away so smoothly at the end. Very pretty poetry, Juliet! :) gw

Juliet Ligon
Date: 3/25/2021 9:31:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. Welcome back!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/25/2021 2:01:00 PM

exceptional imagery I especially love the clockwork waterfalls line:-) hugs Jan xx

Juliet Ligon
Date: 3/25/2021 8:03:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. I was having trouble figuring out how to convert the format to add a picture.