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If rain poured in susurrating sounds of unshed tears, will ungrateful dialects change their insincere expressions of speech, or will this unheard voice forever be lost as echoes within glass walls, where lilac-feathered letters of farewell written in red diamonds, illustrate illusive narratives of an onyx heart haunted by holographic harmonies, in glitters of retro line art~ to graphically craft cacophonous chronicles of unexpressed trauma, engrossed in cursive candor, while this quivering quill remains dipped in purple pansies and primrose poetry, glorifying indigo intuitions that bleed in blue-black and burgundy But, I still keep surfing in sizzling silence towards saffron-streaked sunsets resembling the wisteria warmth of your embellished embrace, awakening from lucid dreams of sparkling silhouettes of us, when I was uncontrollably lost in your pillow-shaped eyes, counting silver stars hanging on long lashes with lilac dust, forgetting the times I was caught in the riveting rhythm of lemonade lies. For in your amorous arms, every qualitative question within incomplete puzzles of life and loss, unravels appealing answers with carnation compassion, upon corners of crumpled pages, where initials of your flowery name is a timeless token, of love that still exists~ in this woeful world of hate from heinous hyenas. But these starry stones of turquoise trust shall be the clandestine clemency that holds this unwritten tale of survival. For, I am unapologetically poetic~ rewriting fuschia future on pastel colored paper parachutes, letting go of twisted tones cloaked with jealous January winds at dawn, as cinnamon gold sequined skies reflect magic within misty mirrors, to begin again as April crawls back, knocking on the laser-lavender portal adorned with teal-cerulean wings of our whimsical fairyland…

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Date: 4/18/2024 9:44:00 AM
I'm so much in love with your poems. The metaphors keep me stalling. "When I was uncontrollably lost in your pillow-shaped eyes, counting silver stars hanging on long lashes with lilac dust." This covers like sheet. The dust would be so beautiful dearest Ink. I always love your way with words. Cheers
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Date: 4/16/2024 8:23:00 PM
An absolute pleasure to read- haunting quality, powerful voice <3
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Date: 4/13/2024 4:03:00 AM
Haunted by holographic harmonies - I'm haunted by how beautifully you pen with such fluid alliteration and metaphors:) exceptional, IE:)
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Date: 4/13/2024 2:05:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your kindness truly grateful alwYs
Date: 4/12/2024 10:32:00 AM
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Date: 4/12/2024 10:56:00 AM
Ive sent you two responses and a new soup mail hahah
Date: 4/12/2024 9:30:00 AM
Alliteration off the charts, Ink. The pillow eyes followed up with the line about the lashes was so cool and of course there many other interesting images. Oh yes, I really liked the metaphor of paper parachutes. So what will you be doing next, Ink?
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Date: 4/13/2024 1:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, awwn you are so kind always sweet andrea, i appreciate your support
Date: 4/12/2024 7:32:00 AM
Like the title, this poem is timeless. Words of tears, hurt, and memories resonates with me. "For I am unapologetically poetic" is an important statement of the right to write.
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Date: 4/13/2024 2:00:00 PM
Thank you so very much you are such a kind soul appreciate always your support
Date: 4/12/2024 2:31:00 AM
Your alliteration is magnificent. To repeat them would necessarily repeat the whole poem. And you ended with a brilliant example. A love poem that touches the heart. Great poetry.
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Date: 4/13/2024 2:00:00 PM
Thank you always dear victor
Date: 4/12/2024 2:18:00 AM
- Woow... so beautiful... you always leave me speechless... - Have a lovely weekend, Ink :) - hugs
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Date: 4/13/2024 2:00:00 PM
Thank you dear anne lise
Date: 4/11/2024 11:18:00 PM
Your poems have immensity Ink Express; they're beautifully overwhelming (in that order). Like Sara, I remain in awe. I love "pillow-shaped eyes, counting silver stars" and "jealous January winds at dawn" Blessings
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Date: 4/13/2024 2:01:00 PM
Awn thank you so much for reading and for leaving your thoughts
Date: 4/11/2024 6:04:00 PM
a loved filled poem, dearest Ink with delicate and artistic words and phrases--(laser-lavender portal), (turquoise trust and (clandestine clemency) I remain in awe of your talent and poetic voice. Have a wonderful evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 4/13/2024 2:01:00 PM
Thank you always sweet soul! Appreciate your kindness truly
Date: 4/11/2024 1:58:00 PM
Your lovely imagery touched me deeply, Ink. I loved 'carnation compassion' and 'fuschia future,' as well as the final 5 lines. Kindest regards. :)
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Date: 4/13/2024 1:55:00 PM
Thank you always
Date: 4/11/2024 9:26:00 AM
Dear Ink, the significance of blood diamonds lies in their deep effect, as they represent the burden of thoughts delicately performed on ethereal cerulean wings. Your poem beautifully captures the complex range of emotions that arise as April comes to a close. It is a profound portrayal of the human experience, filled with depth and meaning. Your words beautifully capture the essence of nostalgia, sadness, and the resilience to forge ahead. Your writing is masterful in its use of vivid imagery and metaphor, effortlessly guiding readers through the intricate depths of human emotion. It invites them to explore a world filled with introspection and strength.
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Date: 4/13/2024 1:55:00 PM
Thank you so very much for such a thoughtful comment. Im grateful for your kind support
Date: 4/11/2024 6:13:00 AM
Charming as ever, my friend. Delightfully in embrace of love and longing, Ink.--saffron-streaked sunsets resembling the wisteria warmth of your embellished embrace--your flowery name is a timeless token, of love that still exists---beautiful love filled verses!
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Date: 4/13/2024 1:46:00 PM
Awwn thank you so much always dear vijay! Im grateful always for your support
Date: 4/11/2024 4:05:00 AM
Blood diamonds pay in memories carried by cerulean wings. April crawls back and the pendulum you wrote, swings of the emotions that parachute, appealing for answers and their reasoning. An epic poem, dear Ink Empress
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Date: 4/13/2024 1:44:00 PM
Awwn thank you so much so kind of you to say and to visit im always grateful
Date: 4/11/2024 2:52:00 AM
Ooooo… susurrating sounds of unshed tears, this opening is so gravetating.. where lilac-feathere letters of farewell written in red diamonds, mmmm papi the way u make words move is sooo enchanting!! graphically craft cacophonous chronicles of unexpressed trauma, mmm love the heaviness.. these starry stones of turquoise trust shall be the clandestine clemency that holds this unwritten tale of survival… mmm look at that flow.. laser-lavender portal adorned with teal-cerulean wings.. amazingly woven
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Date: 4/13/2024 1:45:00 PM
Papi thank you
Date: 4/11/2024 2:44:00 AM
Did the fairies bless you with magic or something, I know no one who can write like this except for you Ink, its beautiful !
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Date: 4/13/2024 5:43:00 AM
Awwn thats such a sweet thing for you to say sweet rose thank you so very much for always being so supportive
Date: 4/11/2024 2:38:00 AM
If rain poured in susurrating sounds of unshed tears, will ungrateful dialects change their insincere expressions of speech,... No, I believe it would not.. You are the metaphorical queen of emotional expression and your poem poem beautifully captures the complexities of emotion, weaving together imagery and metaphor to evoke a sense of longing, loss, and ultimately resilience. The use of vivid colors and sensory details immerses the reader in a world of introspection and introspection
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Date: 4/13/2024 5:44:00 AM
Awwn thank you silent one i am always grateful for your kindness and support truly!
Date: 4/11/2024 1:41:00 AM
Surfing in sizzling silence … beautiful
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Date: 4/13/2024 5:43:00 AM
Thank you dahlin

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