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Timeless Moment

...and all of the sudden the wind came crashing in, and all my fathers wind chimes began to play a hauntingly violent yet mesmerizing melody. And we were caught in that moment, and time stood still, and I raptured you into my arms and held you there...and we shivered into each other...unable to move from that place in time. And I stared so deep into your eyes that I could see the past, present and future pass together as one moment...and I could not let go, I would never let go of that moment when we shared the same breath, the same heartbeat, the same soul...and I knew then and there that I could live ten lifetimes and nothing could ever match that one eternal moment that we will always share together...forever frozen in time.

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Date: 4/12/2014 9:16:00 PM
Hi Curtis, ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. <3 =LINDA
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Date: 4/7/2014 5:00:00 AM
A brilliant write. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week , curtis
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Date: 3/20/2014 12:48:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Curtis :) - I choose your first well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/20/2014 12:54:00 AM
Curtis , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/19/2014 11:53:00 PM
Curtis:), A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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