Timeless Moment

...and all of the sudden the 
wind came crashing in, and all 
my fathers wind chimes began 
to play a hauntingly violent yet 
mesmerizing melody. And we 
were caught in that moment, 
and time stood still, and I 
raptured you into my arms and 
held you there...and we 
shivered into each 
other...unable to move from 
that place in time. And I stared 
so deep into your eyes that I 
could see the past, present and 
future pass together as one 
moment...and I could not let 
go, I would never let go of that 
moment when we shared the 
same breath, the same 
heartbeat, the same soul...and 
I knew then and there that I 
could live ten lifetimes and 
nothing could ever match that 
one eternal moment that we 
will always share 
together...forever frozen in 
time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 12, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Hi Curtis, ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. <3 =LINDA
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April 7, 2014 at 5:00 AM
A brilliant write. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week , curtis
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March 20, 2014 at 12:48 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Curtis :) - I choose your first well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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March 20, 2014 at 12:54 AM
Curtis , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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March 19, 2014 at 11:53 PM
Curtis:), A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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