Timeless Love

Oh, where does the timeless love for you
Spring from? That smile, beautiful, oh yes,
But I haves seen lovely smiles before
I've kissed lips from whence the smile was.

You have gorgeous hair draping shoulders,
I have spread such hair as yours on beds.
Your mouth, quirky; assumes mystery,
I've known mouths even darker than yours.

The world revolves on axis, as do we,
Our core -- our axis -- stars in our eyes.
Oh where does the timeless love for you
Come from, a bit of heaven, and hell.

I have your spirit here with me today,
If I become lost, and sometimes do,
Your spirit beckons me not despair,
I fondle and sniff because it's there.

I've never listened to songs of love,
They have never penetrated my
Psyche. So where does this timeless
Love come from, if not the core of you?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/6/2016 10:03:00 AM
Patrick Cooper, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:50:00 AM
Patrick Cooper, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv *LINDA*
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Date: 1/17/2015 9:10:00 AM
Hi Patrick, I was hoping to find a new poem. Drop by and let me know when you post another one.
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Date: 1/13/2015 9:45:00 AM
This is a wonderfully written poem my friend. I hope to see more of your poems.......Roger
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Date: 1/13/2015 5:29:00 AM
- The new year is still "just a baby" .... I welcome you to P - Soup and wish you a beautiful and peaceful new year - Hope we can share many new poems this year - You write very well, Patrick - Have a great day - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/13/2015 2:34:00 AM
Love in the core- I've gotten it from you. This is romantic. Great read.
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Date: 1/12/2015 10:18:00 AM
Patrick, a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! This is indeed such a beautiful, romantic piece that has the power to ignite the heart with love! Keep churning them out, my friend, as I look forward to reading more of your inspirational work! Pandita.
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Date: 1/12/2015 10:29:00 AM
It does my heart good, Pandita, (love that darn name) that you like my writing. Thank you.
Date: 1/11/2015 6:02:00 PM
Patrick thanks for commenting on my poem - am blown away by this tender romantic poem:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 1/11/2015 7:06:00 PM
(((((hugs))))) It was my pleasure, Jan.
Date: 1/11/2015 5:45:00 PM
I am a sucker for love poems...beautiful...C--->A
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Date: 1/11/2015 5:45:00 PM
Many thanks, Richard, I appreciate your kind words and also thank you for telling me Lyric Man's name.
Date: 1/11/2015 5:24:00 PM
A tremendous first offering to the soup. I suspect you will fit in nicely. Welcome to the soup Patrick. My friend below, his name is David. I see he appreciated your poem as well.
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Date: 1/11/2015 5:46:00 PM
Many thanks, Richard, I appreciate your kind words and also thank you for telling me Lyric Man's name
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