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7/20/2024 for Eight Words Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May 

Timeless Illusion

Silence permeates a desolate landscape. 
Fossil fuels and nukes laid waste 
to everything we knew, everyone we loved,  
now unnaturally erased. 

Yet, a cozy, rustic, little cottage stands. 
A child's scrawl says, "Mom you're awesome!" 
next to pictures on the refrigerator door. 
A vase holds a red rose blossom. 

Pixels emanate from a silicon brain,
swirling into a hologram,
a three-dimensional synthetic scene,
Proclaiming, falsely, "this I am".

This scene is played for centuries and eons hence. 
Because of men's delusion, 
there's no one to see this timeless projection, 
an AI-produced illusion.
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James Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 1:21 PM
Congratulations on your win David. I hope this never happens too. Your words gave good imagery. Emilia : )
Crandall Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 9:06 PM
Thanks Emilia!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 1:02 PM
Wow! It is like a movie scene hopefully notto be reality…the pretense of a rustic cottage placed at AI center. Congrats on your clever write!
Crandall Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 10:58 PM
Thanks Kim! - writing about my fears - hopefully not reality!
Woods Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 10:24 AM
Oh how intriguing! So glad you earned first place! Xoxo
Crandall Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 10:55 PM
Thanks Crystol :-) :-)
mysore Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 8:26 AM
'timeless'. Congratulations dear poet. amazing write.
Crandall Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 9:41 AM
Thanks Thriveni!
May Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 5:01 AM
Congrats on your win, Very nicely penned
Crandall Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 9:41 AM
Thanks Joseph, and thanks for your 8 words - it was fun.
Greenhough Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 8:44 PM
I'll know if I'm living in a hologram. If the housework is done, it's fake. Lol. I like your futuristic poem.
Crandall Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 8:51 PM
haha - good comment - thanks!
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