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Timeless Giant Turtle

In The Land Above The Sky a delicate dreamer dreams falling sky girl so divine, calling out such fragile screams. Gracefully displaying an exquisite, breathtaking scene daring deep blue destiny below, so simply serene. Swooped up on feathers, swiftly floating so free amazed aquatic life beneath, all looking up to see. A mesmerising miracle silently watched in awe even the giant wise turtle dropped her snapping jaw Offering up her worldly, genetic coded shell meticulously marked, a world within to spell. Caring kind mother geomagnetically moving upon fathomless oceans old waves, so soothing. Respected special ancient, so peaceful to all others tracing decades of time to enchant bite frenzied lovers. Protected egg clutches little magnets drawn to the seas where amidst the Coral Castle, tales of earth, grasses, trees. One sacrifice after another for each grains magic worth to place upon the turtles back where the world began its birth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/20/2022 8:57:00 PM
Poem has so much depth. Love turtles, such a spiritual creature. Love your stuff, you should do more
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Date: 4/28/2016 5:50:00 PM
wonderful imagery and alliteration Lisa:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/30/2016 7:42:00 PM
lisa, A great pleasure to find and read your pen today. Love -- SKAT --
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Date: 8/14/2014 11:40:00 PM
Lisa, thank you for the reply
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Date: 8/13/2014 12:37:00 AM
WOW, I just love this, it is very dreamy. Lisa, I don't mind this high ride, on a turtle. A very warm read... Linda
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Lisa Richards
Date: 8/13/2014 10:46:00 AM
Hi Linda Thanks for your kind comments they are very appreciated, I look forward to catching up with your inspiring poetry ...your friend, Lisa
Date: 8/9/2014 9:51:00 PM
Hey, I don't see your reply down here because I had the notification for them turned off it got to be so annoying, but thanks for commenting to my poems. Now I will go see two of yours.
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Date: 8/9/2014 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win. Great write! Kika
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Date: 8/8/2014 7:18:00 PM
Lisa, welcome to the soup and congratulations on a fine win.
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Lisa Richards
Date: 8/9/2014 9:54:00 PM
Thank you Faye for your kind welcome, I appreciate your time and kindness and look forward to following your poetry
Date: 8/7/2014 11:20:00 PM
this is beautiful, Lisa. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Lisa Richards
Date: 8/8/2014 8:27:00 AM
Thank you Andrea for your very kind comments they are very appreciated, sorry for replying late as I have been away for a few days and I'm only now catching up, I never thought I would win so I'm quite shocked at the discovery...
Date: 8/3/2014 1:36:00 PM
Lisa welcome to the soup, this is also quite mesmerising as well, it flows with ease and I like it....David
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Lisa Richards
Date: 8/8/2014 8:23:00 AM
Thank you very much David for your kind welcome and comments I really appreciate your time and kindness, I have been away for a few days and so I am only now catching up, I look forward to following your poetry also...Lisa
Date: 7/31/2014 11:33:00 PM
Indeed, timeless. You told it so well.
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Lisa Richards
Date: 8/8/2014 8:30:00 AM
Thank you very much for your very kind comments I really appreciate your time and kindness, I look forward to catching up and following your poetry also Andrea,

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