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Timeless Blank Block

silent pen dehydrates thirsting for muse lost in a timeless blank block Example of a Monoku Silent One 24 December 2019

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/7/2020 12:27:00 PM

Excellent. Running out of ink can be quite a dilemma, S-1! ~ Regards // paul

Ann Foster

Date: 1/7/2020 9:59:00 AM

So sad... trying to imagine a way out, a way to send ink... alas. Just thoughts no words yet on paper my friend. Prayers instead, more powerful. Your pen is fine, and sharp like a stiletto knife always... perfectly edged. Many favs for me...Happy Decade to you. God Bless. Ann

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/29/2019 10:20:00 AM

A good example.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/29/2019 6:19:00 AM

Your words will always remain timeless in my mind, thankyou

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2019 12:36:00 PM

Back again to say thanks for my win in your contest, Silent One, and for this example in your contest.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/27/2019 11:06:00 AM

And on this note I have to say, you know yourself well. Happy New Year!

Silent One
Date: 12/27/2019 2:15:00 PM

Thank you.. happy new year..

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/27/2019 10:21:00 AM

I like your poetic response. Good luck in the contest.

Silent One
Date: 12/27/2019 2:16:00 PM

Thank Richard..

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/26/2019 11:59:00 PM

A message penned with deep thought and the skill of your pen. Muses do disappear now and then maybe your muse took a festive break? Blessings, Jennifer.

Silent One
Date: 12/27/2019 4:01:00 AM

This was an example for the contest, my muse is oppressed by me being really busy, however, ive had a few days off and have written a few poems this week... thanks.... blessings.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/26/2019 8:18:00 PM

Great monoku and I think my muse has gone into a long period of hibernation this winter. love phyl

Silent One
Date: 12/27/2019 4:01:00 AM

Thank you..

Ann Foster

Date: 12/26/2019 9:40:00 AM

Wow... Ann

Silent One
Date: 12/26/2019 1:29:00 PM

Thanks

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/26/2019 7:35:00 AM

Amen! Excellent muse, SO. I feel you on that blank block Epiphany Lane closure. Next level poets must always have their Dream Access Muse Road open during eyes-closed time. And as you adroitly know, Silence is Golden if you have the non-verbal communication skills to cross any poetic muse barrier line. Cool One liner poem, dear friend. Love and best wishes for the holidays.

Silent One
Date: 12/26/2019 8:47:00 AM

I could not have put it better myself... Thank you Freddie..

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/25/2019 10:05:00 PM

i think we can all relate to this one...my muse likes to sleep for long periods of time sometimes and other times she won't shut up... love this :) hugs

Silent One
Date: 12/26/2019 8:48:00 AM

Yes, I agree.. the muse comes and goes.. it is all about patience and not forcing it..

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/25/2019 9:28:00 PM

Well stated. Great monoku.

Silent One
Date: 12/26/2019 8:50:00 AM

Thank you..

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/25/2019 8:28:00 PM

The pen is never dry, nor thoughts lost. Sometimes, the muse goes on vacation. I think. :) Mine likes to hide in the clouds. If I tickle her, she might come out to play. I never rush her though. She doesn't like that. Words will always find you. :) Brandy

Silent One
Date: 12/26/2019 8:51:00 AM

Yes, i agree... never rush.. thanks..

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/25/2019 10:48:00 AM

Oh no! Wishes for no dehydrated pens this 2020! Merry Christmas! Best wishes to you and your loved ones for the new year, Silent One.

Silent One
Date: 12/26/2019 8:52:00 AM

hopefully for all.. thank you.. same to you Line..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/25/2019 9:59:00 AM

Ooh! I can just see the final drip of dehydration but the thirsty will refill the inkwell! The evasive muse cannot hold back for long. Merry Christmas!

Silent One
Date: 12/26/2019 8:53:00 AM

Yes you are right... Hope you had a lovely day... Thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/24/2019 2:57:00 PM

Great one Silent One. I hope you have a Merry Christmas! :)

Silent One
Date: 12/26/2019 8:53:00 AM

Thank you.. hope you had a lovely day..

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/24/2019 1:57:00 PM

Good one, S.O.! Janice

Silent One
Date: 12/24/2019 2:54:00 PM

Thank you..

Laura Leiser

Date: 12/24/2019 12:31:00 PM

Very clever, Silent! I pray you will have a Merry Christmas this year with your family! :)

Silent One
Date: 12/24/2019 12:56:00 PM

Thank you have a great day tomorrow

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/24/2019 12:27:00 PM

I love it! Panagiota

Silent One
Date: 12/24/2019 12:55:00 PM

Thanks..

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/24/2019 11:46:00 AM

Wow! Silent, This is such a good example for your contest:-) Alexis

Silent One
Date: 12/24/2019 12:55:00 PM

Thanks..

Kelli White

Date: 12/24/2019 9:54:00 AM

Truth be told in an infinite whisper on the wings of a feather. Beautiful SO. Kelli

Silent One
Date: 12/24/2019 12:54:00 PM

Thank you..

Eve Roper

Date: 12/24/2019 8:48:00 AM

Wow,,, fantastic example. Merry Christmas my friend

Silent One
Date: 12/24/2019 12:54:00 PM

Thank you..

Constance La France

Date: 12/24/2019 8:47:00 AM

Silent, a wonderful example for your contest. All poets have known the horror of that silent pen and that endless blank but I find by ignoring MUSE for a bit, he comes crawling back to me ~

Silent One
Date: 12/24/2019 12:27:00 PM

I think many will be able to relate to this one... Thank you

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/24/2019 8:35:00 AM

Hello Silent One,yes sometimes our pens dehydrates and our minds are silent for ideas. Yet for a short time. Merry Christmas. Darlene. Have a nice day.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/26/2019 11:18:00 AM

Hello Silent One I hope you had a great Christmas. have a nice day my friend.

Silent One
Date: 12/24/2019 12:26:00 PM

Thank you.. Have a lovely Xmas..