Edward Ibeh Poet Rictameter

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Timeless

Timeless
Our love could stay
 Defying father time 
I would give you my heart, gladly
My whole world, and a piece of heaven, too
If you promise to stay with me
As seasons come and go
This love could be
Timeless



CONTEST 565 ,ANY FORM OR NONE,ANY THEME,UP TO A MAX OF 20 LINES 
Sponsored by: Brian Strand (Winner: 1st Place)
Date written and posted: 08/26/2018

RICTAMETER ME: Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: White Wolf (Winner: 6th Place)
Date written and posted: 08/26/2018

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Line Gauthier February 26, 2019 at 3:15 PM Back with well deserved congrats, Edward. Bravo. Edward Ibeh February 27, 2019 at 3:50 AM Thanks again, Line!:-) Most appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich September 11, 2018 at 4:23 PM aweome win for an awesome poem,Edward. Congratulations. Edward Ibeh September 11, 2018 at 6:18 PM Thank you so much, Andrea!:-)

Subimal Sinha-Roy September 11, 2018 at 3:11 AM Congratulations, Edward on your win. Edward Ibeh September 11, 2018 at 12:15 PM Thank you so much, Subimal!:-)

Jesse Rowe September 10, 2018 at 7:27 PM Back to offer congrats on your placement in the winners circle. This is such a great single stream of thought and it reads like so. Edward Ibeh September 11, 2018 at 12:17 PM Thank you very much, Jesse!

Line Gauthier September 10, 2018 at 3:13 PM Awesome, Edward. A top winner in my eyes. Congrats. Edward Ibeh September 11, 2018 at 12:19 PM Thank you, Line!:-) Most appreciated.

Darlene De Beaulieu August 30, 2018 at 6:31 PM A beautiful poem from the heart. Lovely. Have a nice evening my friend. Edward Ibeh September 1, 2018 at 7:19 AM Thank you so very much, Darlene!:-) xua!

Joanna Daniel August 30, 2018 at 1:31 AM This is an excellent poem, Edward:) should place high:) Edward Ibeh August 30, 2018 at 6:34 AM Thanks, Jo! Glad you liked my poem. I can only hope that it places:-)

Tania Kitchin August 28, 2018 at 6:51 PM Beautifully written poem, good luck in the contest! Edward Ibeh August 28, 2018 at 7:14 PM Thank you so much, Tania!:-)

Kudzai Mhangwa August 28, 2018 at 2:30 AM This is the kind of love that everyone needs. A love that does not end easily or abruptly. Edward Ibeh August 28, 2018 at 7:15 PM I concur! Thanks for your comments and visit, Kudzai!:-)

Jesse Rowe August 26, 2018 at 8:03 PM This is so good. Good luck in the contest! Edward Ibeh August 26, 2018 at 8:57 PM Thank you so much, Jesse!:-) Most obliged.