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Timeless
Our love could stay
Defying father time
I would give you my heart, gladly
My whole world, and a piece of heaven, too
If you promise to stay with me
As seasons come and go
This love could be
Timeless
CONTEST 565 ,ANY FORM OR NONE,ANY THEME,UP TO A MAX OF 20 LINES Sponsored by: Brian Strand (Winner: 1st Place) Date written and posted: 08/26/2018 RICTAMETER ME: Poetry Contest Sponsored by: White Wolf (Winner: 6th Place) Date written and posted: 08/26/2018

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Date: 2/26/2019 3:15:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Edward. Bravo.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/27/2019 3:50:00 AM
Thanks again, Line!:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 9/11/2018 4:23:00 PM
aweome win for an awesome poem,Edward. Congratulations.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/11/2018 6:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea!:-)
Date: 9/11/2018 3:11:00 AM
Congratulations, Edward on your win.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/11/2018 12:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Subimal!:-)
Date: 9/10/2018 7:27:00 PM
Back to offer congrats on your placement in the winners circle. This is such a great single stream of thought and it reads like so.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/11/2018 12:17:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jesse!
Date: 9/10/2018 3:13:00 PM
Awesome, Edward. A top winner in my eyes. Congrats.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/11/2018 12:19:00 PM
Thank you, Line!:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 8/30/2018 6:31:00 PM
A beautiful poem from the heart. Lovely. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/1/2018 7:19:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Darlene!:-) xua!
Date: 8/30/2018 1:31:00 AM
This is an excellent poem, Edward:) should place high:)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/30/2018 6:34:00 AM
Thanks, Jo! Glad you liked my poem. I can only hope that it places:-)
Date: 8/28/2018 6:51:00 PM
Beautifully written poem, good luck in the contest!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/28/2018 7:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tania!:-)
Date: 8/28/2018 2:30:00 AM
This is the kind of love that everyone needs. A love that does not end easily or abruptly.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/28/2018 7:15:00 PM
I concur! Thanks for your comments and visit, Kudzai!:-)
Date: 8/26/2018 8:03:00 PM
This is so good. Good luck in the contest!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/26/2018 8:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jesse!:-) Most obliged.

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