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Time Was Sweet and Giving

Days go by without words and kindness whim He moves slowly as age tends to fail him ohs, ows common persisting complaining Once agile and active now weakening Time was sweet and giving now with sorrow Naive, “Is it today or tomorrow?” Time just seems to creep along in his limbs Now season sneak up behind him yet dim Time doesn’t creep and slowly pours, it’s rapid Once my hero, now alone since his passed Time will not let me beg, steal, or borrow Filled kiss my heart thirst for without sorrow Silence wasn’t a word for the boy next door Now I hunger, “You are all I long for” 11/28/2016

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Date: 11/30/2016 5:18:00 AM
Hmmm nice write eve yet sad and intresting Richard
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Date: 11/29/2016 5:24:00 PM
What a poignant piece this is. I can see the old man just waiting to be once more united with his loved one. Beautifully written and wonderful imagery Loved it. God Bless and thanks for the kind words on my "In My Rose Garden". JB
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Date: 11/28/2016 8:26:00 AM
Such a sad and heart touching poetic tale of loss and missing someone who is now gone. Beautifully done Eve.
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Date: 11/28/2016 7:33:00 AM
I feel the love and the sadness felt for this dear friend or maybe a closer relationship at some time in your life..I enjoyed reading your heartfelt sonnet..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/28/2016 3:42:00 AM
Great sonnent...A 7 for this perfect piece...
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