Time Warp With You Gone

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and suddenly
i’ve stepped through
an archway

time caught in a loop
wallowing in slow motion

surreal day from night

the world turning
without you without me

and through an expanse of molasses
i muddle through

lost and alone while
i’m not sure at all where you’ve gone



AP: 3rd place 2021

Posted on November 24, 2020

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/24/2020 4:54:00 PM

This time is surreal. Writing is cathartic for many of us. I hope it will be for you.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/24/2020 7:34:00 PM

Absolutely ~ I count on writing to get me through these very surreal times. Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren