Tim Smith Poet Free verse

Time Turns

Heading away time turns 
the corner as visions rewind 
frame by frame ticking 

feeling out the feelings 
once felt before 

emptiness echoes 
filling out 
a blackened soul 

light flickers 
and tragedy triggers 
past supposition 

stuck and awkward positioned 

I listen as nothingness roars 
running out of time 
the blindness soars

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Darren White August 18, 2018 at 5:12 AM Hi Tim, I'm coming back from nothingness to thank you for this beautiful poem :)

Jonathan Medida August 18, 2018 at 5:11 AM nice, great read!

Arthur Vaso August 18, 2018 at 2:30 AM Darn netflix!!! great write!!

CayCay Godwin August 17, 2018 at 6:34 PM Absolutely beautiful, Tim. Touching - I felt the feel in your poem. All the best ... CayCay

Heidi Sands August 17, 2018 at 2:32 PM Well written Tim. Powerful :)

Charmaine Chircop August 17, 2018 at 2:06 PM Nothingness,Emptiness,Blindness...Oh this gives me a sad feeling...Time turns...and mewpages are written,hopefully of light,sunshine and happiness.Deep poem to delve in.

Chris Green August 17, 2018 at 1:44 PM This was really deep my friend. I can feel this.

Jan Allison August 17, 2018 at 1:38 PM great emotion in your lines Tim, I especially love the final stanza:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith August 17, 2018 at 12:56 PM So it does Tim, I like it...