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We set the dials The men in white To send our agent To the light Switches click Red glowing lamps And needles swing To show the amps The clock it winds As time descends From present day To make amends A tweak to fate A gentle nudge When current outcomes Fail to budge To set things straight To fix the error And save the heart From night-time terror If only There could be a way Reversing time To save the day

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Date: 9/8/2023 7:08:00 AM
Love this!
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Sam Scott
Date: 9/8/2023 7:24:00 AM
Bless you Kim x
Date: 9/8/2023 2:39:00 AM
Very well written on the theme “ time” i especially loved “ if only there could be a way to reverse time” brilliant
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Date: 9/8/2023 2:58:00 AM
Very kind :) if time-travel was possible (apart from wanting to meet Leonardo da Vinci, say) I think we might all have regrets or things we would want to say, or change.. or is it just me?

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