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Time Trekking

I. A ring imbued with love Is the gift we both have Circle and boundless Unharmed by ages That may our love Retain the passion we have always had Keep the flame Burning in our heart Like the ring’s Undying gleam May the golden ring’s Unscathed gleam Be an inspiration To the usual Fleeting feelings II. Let us trek together In the path of time Along the way It may lacerate Our ephemeral form But our bond’s strength Made out of firm thread of our love And woven By our passion and faith Will remain unstirred And tie forever in our hearts As we trudge our way To eternal lands

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/24/2010 6:29:00 AM
Hi Juan, great write and so emotional! Enjoyed the read this early afternoon! And thank you for your kind comment on "Call of the Cranes". Have a wonderful week ahead! Tc...Gert
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Date: 10/22/2010 7:59:00 PM
An inspiring write that's perfect for anybody getting married :0 wonderful way with words you have here, Juan :) very symbolic! -- nikko :)
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Date: 10/17/2010 11:17:00 AM
enjoyed reading today! thanks for your comments my friend!
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Date: 10/17/2010 12:48:00 AM
A nice symbolic poem, Juan. I'm very sleepy and I wan to see other poems of yours, but I need to get off here finally. So I'll see you tomorrow, and thank so much for commenting to many of my poems today. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/14/2010 8:24:00 PM
hello, JUAN"wow! your spell bounding words are captured perfect in this poem. A little sad with happy spirited emotions to go through. Amazing with them deep thoughts. But, like you said at the end, ( to eternal lands )I really did enjoyed the ending. take care,..p.d.
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Date: 10/14/2010 5:34:00 AM
Very expressive and gripping write on passion with touchy feelings, Juan
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