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... pffft... blows long hair away... from the eyes as she gently, ever so moving slow, inserts home grown, self sewn, Text.mex.i.flux.... there. ... pffft... damn hair, needs a cut. Will it fit? This crystal duck...? Into the bit, just a turn and a tuck... Just a flux.Ca.pacitator... self created by this Creator, to fit the ship. Standing hands on hips... near the switch. ~Did it fit? "Well..." She say.... Warp drive to improbable, possible improbabilities, which sound extra. ordinarily possible to the Boss, are most likely at sum cost but not loss. Is my calculation. ~Is that YOU? Houston? No problem. Just a girl with some bootes on, little music blaring strong, Sherlock, on her arm... Ms.Tree.us smile... or was that mile? ~SOL.a.Lite! You're quite right! ... pffft... blows long hair away... from the eyes as she gently, ever so softly replies... This crystal flies. Without a vent. ;) ~Quack~ lol~ revisited.... there are apparently, some here not familiar with fluxCapacitators and holoducks! ;) http://www.123exp-fantasy.com/star-trek/ "Live Long. And Prosper" Says my honey.... lol!!!!

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Date: 5/16/2009 6:33:00 AM
LOL!...In the words of captain picard, ENGAGE!
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Date: 5/14/2009 10:03:00 AM
I love this poem , it fits me, :)
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Date: 5/12/2009 7:25:00 AM
Fantastic and I really enjoyed reading it. Post some more. Ernilando
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Date: 5/11/2009 6:27:00 PM
a handkerchief if you please---AA
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Date: 5/11/2009 6:11:00 PM
Oh my!-AA
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Date: 5/11/2009 3:32:00 AM
I love this. it is fantasticly enjoyable to read.
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Date: 5/10/2009 7:09:00 AM
Wish I understood this one. I thought maybe you were talking about a hair blower/dryer. Oh well. Interesting writing though :-)
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Date: 5/10/2009 6:42:00 AM
Izzy, what a lovely read, as James mentioned i too thought you were a frustrated electronics engineer endeavouring to get the job done, hair in your eyes impeding your task. But all in all what a kool poem, kindest regards - James,x & that you so much for your comments.
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Date: 5/10/2009 6:15:00 AM
Izzy,..at first I thought you were into electronics,..but then,..oops,..I realized, you were into poetics ! *smiles* Great write Izzy ! james
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Date: 5/9/2009 7:40:00 PM
Izzy, this creativity is what the soup is all about! and what I rejoice in!! just stretch and snap my brain with every line and I'm good-to-go!!!!! love!! love!!! love!!! it!!!! ( I actually felt brain-cells multiplying while reading this poem!) ...Jimmy
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Date: 5/9/2009 7:13:00 PM
Had to read this again..... and thanks again.
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Date: 5/9/2009 7:12:00 PM
That was really fun to read and really enjoyed it and the story of it. Thank you for your warm comments as well and you have a good day.
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Date: 5/9/2009 5:22:00 PM
Creative originality ... very intriguing play around the hair ... fancy lights a fire here.
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Date: 5/9/2009 3:44:00 PM
Mail Call
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Date: 5/9/2009 3:41:00 PM
There is no problem, Houston. We just have a very talented poet on board who takes us on flights of fancy beyond warp speed. Hmm, in what time period did we land, Sherlock? Great poem, Izzy! Gives the reader lots of laughs and smiles (quack). Love, Carolyn
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