Time Travelling

Traveling zipping backwards; history’s expanding... parallels radiated blurs; eclipsing centuries.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 11:26 PM
I am thinking of the "Back to the Future" movies, and the time machine. Sweet!
Kiser Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 2:02 PM
Great movie.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 7:02 PM
Well done! Sometimes time travel is good but like all things it can be used for evil too.
Kiser Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 5:50 AM
Yes, that's a concern to consider for those who want to do so. Thanks.
Adams Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 8:36 PM
i have always thought it would be cool to travel back in time...love the way you penned this one, very imaginable :) hugs
Kiser Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 5:50 AM
Me too. Thanks.
Sands Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 3:35 PM
Great one,, zipping backwards:)
Kiser Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 5:50 AM
Thanks much.
Hopper Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 2:30 PM
Lovely!! One of my most favorite subjects!
Kiser Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 5:51 AM
Good, thank you.
Foster Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 7:49 AM
Wonderful... I am right there, in time machine. I can see it all happening, re-happening and getting ready to happen... Ann
Kiser Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 5:51 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks.
Proxenos Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 5:12 AM
Going backwards in time - wish we could go backwards or forward - your 2nd verse in your haiku says it all - parallels found, eclipsing centuries. A clever write, hope I got it right! Hugs, Jennifer.
Kiser Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 5:51 AM
Yes, thank you.
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