Time Traveler

The fractured light of day rises, so still
And I am but a part, lost in its shade
Question not the sun but the role I fill
Find reason and wonder are ready made
To follow days as a linear string
And remember it has a final end
To count rainbows and colors they bring
Marvel at the symmetry of the bend
Who am I, an intruder to this scene?
One who counts time by the suns that rise
Who lays upon Earth watch the life between
Listen in quiet as stars harmonize

To capture its rhythm, the pulse I feel
To comprehend my time traveled is real


6/10/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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June 18, 2014 at 7:19 AM
stopping back with congratulations on your win
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June 18, 2014 at 6:42 AM
Frederic! Such an incredible write. I have so often had these thought but could never Penn them as beautifully as you have here.. Hats off to you on a fine win!! Hugs.. Arlene..
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June 17, 2014 at 6:14 PM
The music is captured and the sonnet is in harmony !! Lovely poem Frederic!! Congratulations!
Parker Avatar
June 17, 2014 at 8:56 PM
thank you Carrie for reading and your kind response
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June 17, 2014 at 5:01 PM
Dear Frederic, Just as with Deb, the "linear string" jumped out at me. Indeed, there are only so many sunsets that we shall see. This is a very intuitive and thought-provoking poem. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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June 17, 2014 at 5:45 PM
thank you Carolyn, for reading and your kind response
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June 17, 2014 at 4:22 PM
I always enjoy your verse Fred fav line [To follow days as a linear string] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Parker Avatar
June 17, 2014 at 5:46 PM
thank you Debbie for your kind response
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June 13, 2014 at 6:14 PM
Your writing is so beautiful... and you know how to do a sonnet. Thank you for your recent visit to "Books."
Parker Avatar
June 17, 2014 at 5:50 PM
thank you Faye for your kindness
Smith Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 2:52 PM
We must find our roll...wonderful Frederic
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June 17, 2014 at 5:50 PM
thank you Tim
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June 10, 2014 at 2:49 PM
- Wonder of Life... - Beautifully written Frederic - I share your thoughts :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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June 17, 2014 at 5:53 PM
my friend I've come to know the depth of your feeling about nature, it is a bond we share, thank you for reading and for being kind..Frederic
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