Time Traveler

In a café of clocks with smeared hour-hands I land,
A dusty time-sprinter, spring-loaded and grand.
I knot the past with a spark in my palm,
Deciding: “Shall I rewrite the war? Or just calm
the moment I spilled coffee on my first big report?”

I vanish to Versailles with a croissant in tow,
Pause the king mid-chant, whisper, “Maybe say ‘no.’”
Or maybe I nip to my dorm room at dawn,
Swap my quiet “yes” for a bold “let’s go on!”
I blink, I grin — the universe hiccups.

If I stop the stock crash, I’ll be rich, maybe safe.
But if I snip the bruise from youth… will the laugh leave my face?
I flick the lever, the cosmos swirls like confetti,
Time hands me back my mess, still a little sweaty.
Because changing one wink of what-was may yield what-could-be,
And I sip lukewarm coffee, wondering who I’ll now set free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Goldsmith Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 12:04 PM
What a creative write you have here. Time is a funny thing. Always there yet Not seeing it.. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a fun day writing away............
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 7:27 AM
Enjoyed your write! Time travel may not be safe, but imagine if it was?! One of the most boring scenarios was on a tv show, “The Good Place.” The present day people longed to meet people from the past and they were not at all what they wanted. We long to brush up with settings and costume but not dullness or violence. Fave for me! Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 7:17 PM
Wow. Very well done here. So creative
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 12:11 PM
A fun, creative writing piece, using vivid imagery like a classic time-travel dilemma: altering major historical events versus fixing personal blunders and weighing the potential benefits against unforeseen consequences. The central paradox of time travel: even a small change can have massive, unpredictable effects on the future and one’s own identity. Left realizing that the “what-was” might be preferable to the unknown “what-could-be.”
Poet Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 11:46 AM
Excellent poem raises questions about the cost of altering the past and the weight of youth's mistakes, prompting readers to reflect on their own experiences. Best for a win, Jay.
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