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Time Travel

They say don't stop dreaming Vain fancy of your return to appease my craving is so overwhelming Whenever i think of you Unable to fathom an answer what to do Seen so much since you departed Everyone's proclaimation that what happens is for the best When unable to share Remember, how you hugged me like a bear Dissipating the companion of fear You are far, I know, I keen for you to be near In accepting your demise they think i was slow As air egressed my lungs, so stunned by the blow Regret the void that important day of my life On becoming someone's wife Reassured that this is one's nest Just put your fears to rest Choosing the right path, thrashed here and flogged there Searching that miracle might make you return but you were nowhere near Harvested threats and hordes of wrath making one so cold Paucity of warm kindred thinking i am so bold Fate turning tides when discarded by one's ow But one's brow unallowed to wrinkle with a frown Time travel one knows is still just a test But for now dad, for you and me, it looks best One knows that one's favourite will never come back Innumerable hours spent by you on me designed a web held strong against the wolf's pack

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Date: 11/24/2015 2:24:00 PM
Enjoyed your style of diction and syntax as well as the "truths" therein. Your use of "keen", however, is not good english. It's not a verb, unless you say "I am keen..." thank you for stopping by to read me. Much success in your writing. / M
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/24/2015 2:30:00 PM
Thanks, i appreciate your endorsed ammendment and will definitely benefit from it in my future endeavours.
Date: 9/4/2015 5:27:00 PM
A wonderful poem honoring your father & his love & teachings designing a web protecting you
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 9/4/2015 9:28:00 PM
A tim tunnel of memories so precious indeed
Date: 9/3/2015 5:21:00 AM
I love the thought of time travel and just go back and look one more time, for now I just use my memories
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 9/3/2015 7:25:00 AM
Yes, foregone moments are always precious for different reasons.
Date: 8/17/2015 7:23:00 AM
Welcome to soup..Keep the words flowing from your inspired pen..Thanks for dropping by.Sara
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 8/17/2015 8:24:00 AM
Thanks for your review. Stay in touch.

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