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Time Travel

Yesterday is gone soon today will pass as well I'll travel with it

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Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 1/11/2012 3:40:00 PM

Congratulations....a good haiku.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/3/2012 8:09:00 AM

Congrats on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best Rachel. Love, Carol

clay robbins

Date: 11/16/2011 9:09:00 AM

This is a 'Haiku' that everyone can relate to; 'cept maybe those that will depart this world on this day. Simple thought, fun to read... I really like it. (7.0)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/16/2011 6:26:00 AM

Congratulations on being featured this week Rachel. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/16/2011 2:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Rachel

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/23/2011 3:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Rachel. Love, Carol

Ryan Jackson

Date: 8/22/2011 7:39:00 AM

Hey Rachel, very good and interesting piece! I'm enjoying reading your work. Peace, Ryan J.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2011 9:05:00 PM

I have read your poem and it was awesome,.. thanks for sharing your wonderful haiku. Enjoy your day,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/20/2011 5:44:00 AM

I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and excellent piece Rachel. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2011 4:31:00 PM

Interesting work..Sara