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Time Travel

Yesterday is gone
soon today will pass as well
I'll travel with it

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Leo Larry Amadore

January 11, 2012 at 3:40 PM

Congratulations....a good haiku.

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 3, 2012 at 8:09 AM

Congrats on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best Rachel. Love, Carol

Clay Robbins

November 16, 2011 at 9:09 AM

This is a 'Haiku' that everyone can relate to; 'cept maybe those that will depart this world on this day. Simple thought, fun to read... I really like it. (7.0)

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 16, 2011 at 6:26 AM

Congratulations on being featured this week Rachel. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 16, 2011 at 2:46 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Rachel

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 23, 2011 at 3:19 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Rachel. Love, Carol

Ryan Jackson

August 22, 2011 at 7:39 AM

Hey Rachel, very good and interesting piece! I'm enjoying reading your work. Peace, Ryan J.

Poet Destroyer A

July 23, 2011 at 9:05 PM

I have read your poem and it was awesome,.. thanks for sharing your wonderful haiku. Enjoy your day,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 20, 2011 at 5:44 AM

I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and excellent piece Rachel. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

July 19, 2011 at 4:31 PM

Interesting work..Sara

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