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Time To Succeed

A lot of reasons to cry
A lack of reasons to smile

 Shall I cry 
Or once again try

My heart is daunting
My mind is pondering

Time has ended
My luck has fainted

My mind has amended
But my innerself is not contented

Again I collapsed with my failure
Again I cried at my failure

But this time I won't lose hope
Its my last innings

I won't lose hope 
Untill I keep working hard on my goal

I shall World hard excreedingly
And once again win monstrously

Then I shall have alot of reasons to smile
But none reason to cry

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Saroj Kanwar

Date: 4/6/2021 1:19:00 AM

Nice poem .. acc. To me , we cry for things because we want them & someone also said "Weak people never cry ". So , crying for things in not bad ... because it make us stronger & more stronger everytime. I love the poem ..I am adding in my fav list . Keep on sharing ....have a good day!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/1/2021 12:12:00 PM

Hello Mr. Witcher, yes we cry for many reasons. The mind ponders the reason why we cry. Hope gives us a reason to carry on. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/2/2021 11:31:00 AM

Hello Mr. Watcher, you are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend.

Mr Witcher
Date: 3/2/2021 8:19:00 AM

Thanks alot for your kind words