Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

"time To Sleep"

Don't toss and turn through the night....
Open your window for my words are in flight...
Pull your blanket up tight and rest your head my dear..
For my soul drifts close to lift any fear...
Let your eyes close and dream of tomorrow...
That will be filled of joy and not any sorrow....
Let your bed be my arms as you sleep in peace....
And keep that window open so I can drift in as a breeze...

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Jod!E Quintero August 25, 2010 at 8:56 AM Wow such a peaceful write...

Anthony Beesley August 24, 2010 at 7:23 AM good write the end poses a bloody maroon question mark

Carol Fillmore August 24, 2010 at 7:05 AM this is moving...very! and comforting too:) Thank you Michael for your comment on my recent post! as young as I feel, late 20s early 30s, though my body declares not exactly accurate! lol

Sharon Tideswell August 24, 2010 at 5:31 AM A beautifully soothing rhyme Michael. Very dreamy and comforting. ( just one typo piece/peace) ~ Sharon :)

John Rhinem August 23, 2010 at 10:24 PM Smile ~ "So Soft, Peaceful & Gentle; Like A Soothingly Spoken Lullaby; My Dear Gifted & Blessed Friend Michael J. Falotico!!!" ~ I hope that life is treating "You & Yours" perfectly my friend and this, "Is An Extremely Beautiful Poem" ~ "Much Love & Warmth to You & Your Loves Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Tomorrow, Amid The Gentle Waters of Flowing Love;" Bye My Dear Friend!:) ~

Wilma Neels August 23, 2010 at 8:54 PM Wow Michael, this would make me drift off for sure.. I love the reassuring theme to it, beautiful for lack of a better word, luv Wilma

Poet Destroyer A August 23, 2010 at 6:00 PM a soothing write, enjoyed your write..P.D.

Debbie Guzzi August 23, 2010 at 5:23 PM You missed my spelling booboo LOL in Morning Glory! Never hesitate to tell me! Your verse above would sure help me sleep! SO KIND and caring!

James Marshall Goff August 23, 2010 at 4:42 PM beautiful dreamscape! Michael, jimbo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 23, 2010 at 3:39 PM Let your bed be my arms.. wonderful line here my W.K. and my soul drfts close to lift any fear.. magnificent..must make this one a new fav Michael.. with luv.. ciao.. appreciate your sweet comments for a Jersey Girl who lu back...

Anthony Nutter August 23, 2010 at 3:12 PM The spirit drifting in through an open window, bringing peace and comfort.

Poet Destroyer A August 23, 2010 at 2:52 PM hello! Michael, how are you once again today. Michael, this is a very lovely poem to pass around when a certain someone needs comfort. really wow! On them lonely nights one can sure read this poem to help me fall asleep. Enjoyed,..p.d.