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Time To Rest

Oh, my child life went flying with wind Matured when youth was still blind Now waiting for my destined guest Yes! when he cometh, my time will rest. Won second place in Poe-Etic Verse Poetry Contest sponsored by charles messina

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Date: 3/4/2020 6:37:00 AM
This is wonderful and genuine, Jenish. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Hugs Charlie
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/4/2020 7:17:00 AM
Thank you Charles.. As I already mentioned in some other comments, this contest was fantastic.. It helps us to try a different style than what we usually do.. So thank you for giving us that opportunity..
Date: 3/3/2020 2:15:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, Jenish ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/3/2020 10:56:00 PM
Thank you Anne for that shining comment..
Date: 3/3/2020 9:50:00 AM
Back with congrats Jenish, the man intrigues me so have download some of his work. Tom.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/3/2020 10:56:00 PM
Actually this is one of the best contest which I attended.. It mould people into a different style from that which they usually are.. Thank you.. Can Poe reborn?
Date: 3/3/2020 8:16:00 AM
Lovely, Jenish! Congrats! Janice
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/3/2020 9:20:00 AM
Thank you Janice..
Date: 3/3/2020 3:25:00 AM
Excellent Jenish, congrats. :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/3/2020 3:44:00 AM
Thank you Gary..
Date: 2/22/2020 7:52:00 PM
My goodness, pure poetry. Good Luck in the contest Jenish...
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/22/2020 9:09:00 PM
Thank you Shirley for that delightful comment..
Date: 2/22/2020 8:36:00 AM
brilliantly penned Jenish… very poe like, one of the best I have seen thus far! best wishes in the contest! hugs
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/22/2020 9:57:00 AM
Thank you Sandra for your delightful support.. Have a great day..
Date: 2/22/2020 8:35:00 AM
Wonderful read. Well done my friend.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/22/2020 9:56:00 AM
Thank you Mark for your support...
Date: 2/22/2020 6:43:00 AM
I have a thing for Poe. The idea of resting and not running around like a blue-a**ed blow fly is appealing. I wonder if we do have time to rest though, if it all is recycled again...excellent verse Jenish, makes one think about rest. x
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/22/2020 9:55:00 AM
The idea of resting is appealing for all but when it comes to ultimate resting they fears..Thank you..
Date: 2/21/2020 4:18:00 PM
Well done tribute to Poe, love the second line!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/21/2020 11:24:00 PM
Thank you for your support and kind comment..
Date: 2/19/2020 9:54:00 PM
Nice poem in classic style. Seems time moves quicker when more is behind us. Best wishes for the contest.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/19/2020 10:31:00 PM
Time moves quicker when life is smooth.. Thank you Juliet for your profound comment..
Date: 2/19/2020 2:21:00 PM
Good Luck In The Contest. Few words but much said. Enjoy your day..........
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/19/2020 10:30:00 PM
Thank you Paula.. Have a great day..
Date: 2/19/2020 9:52:00 AM
Very Poe-Etic Jenish.. Good luck. Tom
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/19/2020 10:07:00 AM
Thank you.. It is just my humble version of the great poet..
Date: 2/19/2020 9:42:00 AM
- Well done ... lovely poem, Jenish - GL in the contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/19/2020 10:07:00 AM
Thank you Anne for the delightful comment..
Date: 2/19/2020 7:32:00 AM
Wonderful. All the best dear poet.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/19/2020 7:44:00 AM
Thank you Sanjay for your kind comment..
Date: 2/19/2020 7:27:00 AM
Excellent Poe-etic verse Jenish! My best to you in the contest :), xomo
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/19/2020 7:32:00 AM
Thank you Maureen for your support and kind words..

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