Jenish Somadas Poet Verse

Time To Rest

Oh, my child life went flying with wind
Matured when youth was still blind
Now waiting for my destined guest
Yes! when he cometh, my time will rest.


Won second place in Poe-Etic Verse Poetry Contest sponsored by charles messina

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Charles Messina March 4, 2020 at 6:37 AM This is wonderful and genuine, Jenish. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Hugs Charlie Jenish Somadas March 4, 2020 at 7:17 AM Thank you Charles.. As I already mentioned in some other comments, this contest was fantastic.. It helps us to try a different style than what we usually do.. So thank you for giving us that opportunity..

Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2020 at 2:15 PM - A wonderful poem, Jenish ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jenish Somadas March 3, 2020 at 10:56 PM Thank you Anne for that shining comment..

Tom Cunningham March 3, 2020 at 9:50 AM Back with congrats Jenish, the man intrigues me so have download some of his work. Tom. Jenish Somadas March 3, 2020 at 10:56 PM Actually this is one of the best contest which I attended.. It mould people into a different style from that which they usually are.. Thank you.. Can Poe reborn?

Janice Canerdy March 3, 2020 at 8:16 AM Lovely, Jenish! Congrats! Janice Jenish Somadas March 3, 2020 at 9:20 AM Thank you Janice..

Gary Smith March 3, 2020 at 3:25 AM Excellent Jenish, congrats. :) Jenish Somadas March 3, 2020 at 3:44 AM Thank you Gary..

Shirley Hawkins February 22, 2020 at 7:52 PM My goodness, pure poetry. Good Luck in the contest Jenish... Jenish Somadas February 22, 2020 at 9:09 PM Thank you Shirley for that delightful comment..

Sandra Adams February 22, 2020 at 8:36 AM brilliantly penned Jenish… very poe like, one of the best I have seen thus far! best wishes in the contest! hugs Jenish Somadas February 22, 2020 at 9:57 AM Thank you Sandra for your delightful support.. Have a great day..

Mark Koplin February 22, 2020 at 8:35 AM Wonderful read. Well done my friend. Jenish Somadas February 22, 2020 at 9:56 AM Thank you Mark for your support...

Lady Labyrinth February 22, 2020 at 6:43 AM I have a thing for Poe. The idea of resting and not running around like a blue-a**ed blow fly is appealing. I wonder if we do have time to rest though, if it all is recycled again...excellent verse Jenish, makes one think about rest. x Jenish Somadas February 22, 2020 at 9:55 AM The idea of resting is appealing for all but when it comes to ultimate resting they fears..Thank you..

Michelle Faulkner February 21, 2020 at 4:18 PM Well done tribute to Poe, love the second line! Jenish Somadas February 21, 2020 at 11:24 PM Thank you for your support and kind comment..

Juliet Ligon February 19, 2020 at 9:54 PM Nice poem in classic style. Seems time moves quicker when more is behind us. Best wishes for the contest. Jenish Somadas February 19, 2020 at 10:31 PM Time moves quicker when life is smooth.. Thank you Juliet for your profound comment..

Paula Goldsmith February 19, 2020 at 2:21 PM Good Luck In The Contest. Few words but much said. Enjoy your day.......... Jenish Somadas February 19, 2020 at 10:30 PM Thank you Paula.. Have a great day..

Tom Cunningham February 19, 2020 at 9:52 AM Very Poe-Etic Jenish.. Good luck. Tom Jenish Somadas February 19, 2020 at 10:07 AM Thank you.. It is just my humble version of the great poet..

Anne-Lise Andresen February 19, 2020 at 9:42 AM - Well done ... lovely poem, Jenish - GL in the contest :) - // Anne-Lise :) Jenish Somadas February 19, 2020 at 10:07 AM Thank you Anne for the delightful comment..

Sanjay Karmakar February 19, 2020 at 7:32 AM Wonderful. All the best dear poet. Jenish Somadas February 19, 2020 at 7:44 AM Thank you Sanjay for your kind comment..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 19, 2020 at 7:27 AM Excellent Poe-etic verse Jenish! My best to you in the contest :), xomo Jenish Somadas February 19, 2020 at 7:32 AM Thank you Maureen for your support and kind words..