Time To Make a Break

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When I married you It was for better or worse Only to struggle Why do I feel as if I've wilted Only a shadow of myself Time to make a break

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/21/2018 10:13:00 PM

Dear Tara, your poem is very touching. Everyone goes though a phase when they wonder if this is all worth it. That's when it's most important to have open discussions. Best of luck.

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/15/2016 3:52:00 PM

Such a sad poem with insight, Tahira. Your poem goes well with the flowers that I assume you created! Very nice :)

Tahira Parveen
Date: 9/15/2016 3:58:00 PM

Thank you Laura. Yes, I do a bit of art.

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/14/2016 2:20:00 PM

Love doesn't come free! Everything has a price, Tahira. Nice write!

Tahira Parveen
Date: 9/15/2016 9:08:00 AM

Yeah i agree Daniel. Thank you for the comment.

Tahira Parveen
Date: 9/15/2016 8:58:00 AM

Yeah i agree Daniel. Thank you for the comment.