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Time To Make a Break

When I married you
It was for better or worse
Only to struggle
Why do I feel as if I've wilted
Only a shadow of myself
Time to make a break
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gauthier Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 10:13 PM
Dear Tara, your poem is very touching. Everyone goes though a phase when they wonder if this is all worth it. That's when it's most important to have open discussions. Best of luck.
Leiser Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 3:52 PM
Such a sad poem with insight, Tahira. Your poem goes well with the flowers that I assume you created! Very nice :)
Parveen Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 3:58 PM
Thank you Laura. Yes, I do a bit of art.
Turner Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 2:20 PM
Love doesn't come free! Everything has a price, Tahira. Nice write!
Parveen Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Yeah i agree Daniel. Thank you for the comment.
Parveen Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 8:58 AM
Yeah i agree Daniel. Thank you for the comment.
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