Time To Let Go

tears are falling like the rain from a storm
words are getting throwed like you playing catch with a friend
eyes are getting open like a baby coming out of his mother 
time to let go of the hurt 
of the pain 
of the lies 
all the sign are there 
no point of trying to hold on to something that dont want to be here
it going to be hard
but I made my choice 
I tryed to make it work
I tryed to take the hurtful words that was given and taken
I tryed to look at it from both of our view
But it not working
im open i tell you what on my mind 
good and bad 
but you cant tell me why you here if you not happy
you got so many rules and no ring on my finger
things is about what you want not me 
and the distance is hurting me to the point where I hate life it self
Im to good to you and for you 
Im setting my self to low to be with a man like you
that think only of himself 
that dont want to hear my side 
but say what on his mind
that got his head stuck up so far in his well you know
time to let go
yes I love you but i love you to much
because im giving 500% and getting less then 15%
I see something wrong with that
I might make a big mistake
or it might be the best thing that ever happen to me
but only time will tell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 7/23/2012 3:43:00 PM
love yourself girl,great write a little sad,but you know what's to be done,wish you the best Martica
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