Time To Go Merry-Go-Round

You are in your prime, and I’m in my clime;
Why sweetie in twenty then we waste this time?
Come, dance; we can gently our pleasures hound,  
For here’s a time for us to go merry-go-round.  

Run around, and you’ll see how flowers bloom
And drones fly around wanting for some room;
Birds, herds, and all love while their time is high,
So come sweetie; in delay, our prime will sigh.  

Moon smiles and night palls a velvet blue veil,
And owls and curlews hail with a flirting tale;  
Xylophones and cymbals bounce for our dance,
So come sweetie; let’s dive in a hypnotic trance.


March 11, 2021
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Aug. 16, 2020 
*A 1st Place* in the following contest (judged on Aug. 27, 2020)
A Time For Us
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Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 6:18 PM
Loved this and especially this line: For here’s a time for us to go merry-go-round.
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 6:48 PM
Thank you so much, Kim, for this great comment!!
Ermine Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:37 AM
Newton, a dizzying creation. This poem feels like a festival. A lot is happening, a circus, but it's perfectly you . Congratulations! Your style is unique!
Ranaweera  Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 11:13 AM
Thank you so much, Sigrid, for this wonderfully great comment!!
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