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The night air is crisp and cool, moistened by my trickling tears. For; I'm alone with my fears, left waiting here like a fool. Her lies lured me here tonight, using her persuasive voice. And she left me little choice, I didn't want to start a fight. She used every trick she knew, starting off with sexy talk. And had me ignore the clock, hinting my dreams could come true. Anxiety-fueled thoughts run the gauntlet of my mind. For; she is not always kind, tying my heart into knots. I have a thirst I can't quench, and a belly full of pain. But, here I wait once again, sitting on a cold park bench. I spy the first flakes of snow, starting to tumble and fall. And there's little chance she'll call, so; I guess it's time to go.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/19/2018 10:57:00 PM

I love the way you constructed this poem, Emile. The flow is perfect.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/20/2018 9:07:00 AM

Thanks so much Line, your comments are always most welcome my friend, Emile.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/7/2017 6:43:00 PM

Very sad to be taunted with feelings of the heart. Very well written, Emile, your work is alway enjoyed ~*

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/8/2017 8:45:00 AM

Thanks so much Eve, I truly appreciate your support and comments my friend, Emile.

Indiana Shaw

Date: 7/29/2017 11:41:00 AM

Sad but very beautifully written and deepened by picking the right image to go with the poem - Indiana x x x

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/29/2017 1:38:00 PM

Thank you so much Indiana, your comments and support are most welcome, Emile.

Anna Hopper

Date: 7/17/2017 2:44:00 PM

Sad, but beautiful as always!

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/17/2017 4:40:00 PM

Thanks Anna, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/17/2017 5:28:00 AM

Oh...what a sad ending. How can people be so cruel. I related to the belly full of pain so well, dear. Great write...even in its sorrow. Hugs

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/17/2017 9:21:00 AM

Thanks so much Eileen, I truly appreciate your support and comments my friend, Emile.

Akkina Downing

Date: 7/16/2017 8:41:00 PM

Definitely sad, one that many can relate to indeed. But as always, and like Miss Heidi said, a very well written piece :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/17/2017 9:20:00 AM

Thanks so much Akkina, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/16/2017 3:19:00 PM

Well written again Emile. You write poems so well that can reach out to many people for them to relate to. :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/16/2017 7:29:00 PM

Thanks so much Heidi, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/16/2017 1:55:00 PM

Excellent write! The season joins in on the sadness!

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/16/2017 2:50:00 PM

Thanks so much Kim, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Silent One

Date: 7/16/2017 12:24:00 PM

This is really sad Emile, I hope it is fictional.. A deep write, and one that needs to be read and heard..

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/16/2017 2:49:00 PM

Thanks Silent One, this poem is fictional...but touches upon feelings we can all relate to... I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 7/16/2017 11:46:00 AM

A sad, but very well written poem Emile; I hope it is fiction, but its message of love is clear. God bless

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/16/2017 2:54:00 PM

Thanks so much Keith, this poem is fictional...but touches upon feelings that are easy to relate to... I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.