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Time To Disembark

it is natural that this is a time for memories after all these years aboard the planet and having almost arrived the time to disembark so it's touching to remember those sublime moments and those not so much I didn't want to become a bitter old man brooding over nitpicking mumbling if they speak loudly or if someone is late for dinner but I'm here brooding a lot of nitpicking outraged because someone always arrive late for dinner I actually didn't know how pleasurable it is just sit around and complain.

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Date: 3/1/2022 7:35:00 AM
(chuckling) ...one of the perks of age, my friend. I really liked your poem, Marco. We all indulge in a certain amount of nitpicking, and I must say, it can be very satisfying.
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