Time To Die

Time for me to die but can't find the time Thought about suicide but it's still a crime It's against the law Feeling so distraught There must be a word that “rhymes” with time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Lawless Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 10:13 AM
..."sublime" ....but I think that was banned from poetry a half century ago
Ellison Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 10:58 AM
Can't imagine why... it's kinda sexy! How are you John John!! LOL
Hankins Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 8:35 AM
I expressed similar sentiments last week, Jack, and my GP put me on anti-depressants (which were terrible, by the way). I stopped taking the pills and decided to get on with life!
Hankins Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 11:49 AM
I hear you, but I was having some terrible side effects that were so unpleasant I couldn't continue. I don't think I'm that depressed, to begin with...pretty normal, I'd say, for a guy with my age and ailments.
Ellison Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 9:39 AM
Should you not listen to your GP? You just never know... I'm one who listens! I maybe delusional! LOL
Cunningham Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 4:48 AM
Life is one big rat race, no time to do anything these days, even death lol. Im back from my travels. Tom
Ellison Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 4:55 AM
No time to die... can't fit it in! LOL Was that a short vacation?
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