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Time To Die

Time for me to die but can't find the time Thought about suicide but it's still a crime It's against the law Feeling so distraught There must be a word that “rhymes” with time

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Date: 5/2/2022 10:13:00 AM
..."sublime" ....but I think that was banned from poetry a half century ago
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/2/2022 10:58:00 AM
Can't imagine why... it's kinda sexy! How are you John John!! LOL
Date: 5/2/2022 8:35:00 AM
I expressed similar sentiments last week, Jack, and my GP put me on anti-depressants (which were terrible, by the way). I stopped taking the pills and decided to get on with life!
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Date: 5/2/2022 11:49:00 AM
I hear you, but I was having some terrible side effects that were so unpleasant I couldn't continue. I don't think I'm that depressed, to begin with...pretty normal, I'd say, for a guy with my age and ailments.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/2/2022 9:39:00 AM
Should you not listen to your GP? You just never know... I'm one who listens! I maybe delusional! LOL
Date: 5/2/2022 4:48:00 AM
Life is one big rat race, no time to do anything these days, even death lol. Im back from my travels. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/2/2022 4:55:00 AM
No time to die... can't fit it in! LOL Was that a short vacation?