Time Ticking Hope

Confusion reigns in places we allow ourselves to be
As life hands to us so much to ponder
Not always having answers we may want at the time
All we can do is try, with each step taken
To act upon our talents and instincts
To move with the flow of time ticking hope
While open to thoughts that serve us best
The rest will unfold from the goodness of our hearts


Heidi Sands

2/4/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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February 7, 2018 at 8:54 AM
Great lines Heidi.. Great message, never lost hope...
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February 7, 2018 at 9:05 AM
Thank you Silent One :)
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February 5, 2018 at 1:35 PM
This is a work of poetic art! You’ve captured so much beauty and wisdom into a few lines. I really enjoy your work. You're both creative and imaginative. Emile.
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February 5, 2018 at 2:28 PM
Thank you so much Emile. I appreciate your kind words and support :
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February 5, 2018 at 9:17 AM
A beautiful composition, Heidi, and yes we must trust, the goodness will unfold. A wonderful message xxoo Happy Monday
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February 5, 2018 at 10:05 AM
HI Mike. Yes we must trust. Thank you for the kind comment. Happy Monday :)
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February 4, 2018 at 4:04 PM
Yes--goodness of heart can resolve many conflicts within, especially when there are no answers. Good advice to try with talents and instincts.
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February 4, 2018 at 5:21 PM
I appreciate your comment Vijay. Thank you :)
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February 4, 2018 at 4:00 PM
Well said Heidi, a positive message, with a great last line...
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February 4, 2018 at 5:20 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
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