time sweeps away

inhale,  the lovesick
bursting sunshine rain
every moment beats
ceaseless warm feeling

acoustic years passed
like ascending vines
yet fainted hued shadow
peers through ripen binds
inhale, redefines

flourish aloft through
as time sweeps away
to first dawning light
and gasp a sound waft

1/11/2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Buhagiar Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 2:38 AM
I must add my congratulations. Your poem is so smooth. You always write beautiful poems. Hugs.
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January 12, 2024 at 1:07 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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January 11, 2024 at 11:16 AM
This is deep introspective writing my friend.. I hope you are ok..
Goldsmith Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 10:06 AM
What a creative write. So true, time goes by so fast/faster as we get older... I did enjoy reading this one... Have Blessed day writing away.......................
Sharma  Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 12:55 AM
Oh, this is a very liberating and refreshing write that compels the readers to perceive life in a different philosophical way, where each moment longs to be cherished and embraced.How beautifully you've described the essence of that redefining inhale, that can cleanse our heartbeats and bless our journey..Time sweeps away and we should make an effort before it gets too late to catch that first dawning light.Wow, such mesmerizing wordplay throughout, dear Eve. I loved reading this, sending love ~
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