Christina Hemmer Poet I do not know?

Time Stands Still

Time slowly passes
life slowly fades
people grow older
nothing stays the same
leaves fall,
trees die,
just like life
but never ending.
the sky darkens
forever in a day
with each passing second
worse then the last
in every one
forever
and eternity
waiting patiently
time stands still
will it ever end?
will the pain go away?
with every second
a tear hits the ground
but now, 
unlike then
not blood,
but tears
drop by drop....
time stands still

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Carol Sunshine Brown May 26, 2009 at 4:50 AM Welcome to PoetrySoup. I am hoping to see many more poems here written by you Christina. Love, Carol

James Fraser May 25, 2009 at 3:29 PM Strongly written poem Christina, James

Joseph Spence Sr May 15, 2009 at 6:47 AM This is an excellent submission. I like the flow of the words and the message. Welcome to poetry Soup. ~Joseph

Debbie Guzzi May 14, 2009 at 11:37 AM no not time and not you you have grown...lots of great stuff out there for you! Have heart! Light & Love

Ernilando Tugaff May 10, 2009 at 11:41 AM Christina, beautiful poem. Welcome to the soupland. I have a featutred poem this week. Ernilando

Christina Hemmer May 8, 2009 at 3:10 PM thanks you guys. :)

Rhia Madison Thomer May 8, 2009 at 12:54 PM well written, strong emotion too. suffering like all things has its own time, but it comes and goes like seasons. :) it is never forever. --madison

Anthony Nutter May 8, 2009 at 12:17 PM Well written poem about suffering. It touches the heart. It does seem like it can go on forever. But this too will pass

Diane Christian May 8, 2009 at 11:55 AM a geat written poem, sometimes it feels like our suffering will last a life time but sunshine always follows the rain, sometimes it feels like groundhog day and things seem so grim but the sun will still shine, I trust God in all things and even in the darkest of the dark he always shows me his little spark, it does feel like time stands still but our timing is different from Gods' timing but all will be reaveald, God bless you from diane