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Time Shift

Summer's dead leaves spin down Autumn's red, crumbles brown contest In its Essence Frederic Parker 10/13/14

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Date: 10/25/2014 9:09:00 PM
Your words here work hard, and accomplish much.
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Date: 10/19/2014 11:13:00 AM
so alive in mood and thought, Frederick.. thanks for making my contest a special one.. congrats!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/19/2014 11:18:00 AM
Thank you my poetic friend for including me in your list
Date: 10/18/2014 12:40:00 AM
Great write Frederic ! Love the title time shift,, it really so hsppens n there u nailed it so beautifully! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 10/15/2014 6:36:00 PM
Love this one Frederic...big congrats
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Date: 10/15/2014 3:59:00 PM
I just saw it scored HIGH> Awesome!!
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Date: 10/15/2014 3:52:00 PM
thanks for your lovely comment about me being a deep thinker.My son would beg to differ. haha. I am going to the winners list on this one now. But I really hope you scored high because this was one of my very favorites in the contest and I see it won. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/15/2014 12:24:00 PM
Beautiful imagery in just two lines; well done and congratulations on a well-deserved win, Frederic. // paul
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Date: 10/15/2014 12:20:00 PM
Yours is excellent,congrats Frederic.
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Date: 10/15/2014 11:37:00 AM
I appreciate the imagery in the write, congrats on the win, Frederic
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Date: 10/15/2014 10:50:00 AM
Love this one, the best of the best. I will fav this gem for my collection. Congratulations on your fine write.
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Date: 10/15/2014 9:56:00 AM
I agree with Andrea lovely imagery many congrats Frederic:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/15/2014 12:00:00 AM
wow, not only succinct, but GREAT imagery. One of my very favorites in the contest!!!
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Date: 10/13/2014 6:22:00 PM
Excellent take Frederic...cheers Tim
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