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Time Shift

Summer's dead leaves spin down
                                       Autumn's red, crumbles brown

contest In its Essence
Frederic Parker  10/13/14

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Dan Helppi

October 25, 2014 at 9:09 PM

Your words here work hard, and accomplish much.

Nette Onclaud

October 19, 2014 at 11:13 AM

so alive in mood and thought, Frederick.. thanks for making my contest a special one.. congrats!

Frederic Parker

October 19, 2014 at 11:18 AM

Thank you my poetic friend for including me in your list

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

October 18, 2014 at 12:40 AM

Great write Frederic ! Love the title time shift,, it really so hsppens n there u nailed it so beautifully! Congrats on big win!

David Mohn

October 15, 2014 at 6:36 PM

Love this one Frederic...big congrats

Andrea Dietrich

October 15, 2014 at 3:59 PM

I just saw it scored HIGH> Awesome!!

Andrea Dietrich

October 15, 2014 at 3:52 PM

thanks for your lovely comment about me being a deep thinker.My son would beg to differ. haha. I am going to the winners list on this one now. But I really hope you scored high because this was one of my very favorites in the contest and I see it won. Congratulations.