Time Rolls On

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Poetry/Verse/Time Rolls On
Copyright Protected, ID 10-1585-690-13
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, October 13, 2023
For the International Contest, Bite Size Poems, No 74
Sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 10/30/2023

Honorable Mention

Flowers in the Forest Painting by Louise Miller - Fine Art America

"I wish the dark door of yesterday would close." Quote by _Constance My dad taught me about nature, I loved the trees, birds, flora and forest, and used my words and canvas to capture it. Then, dad died and I plunged into grief, but, I found the courage to climb into the sun !

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/13/2023 3:16:00 PM

All of nature…the grief…then climbing into the center! Well done!

Constance La France
Date: 10/15/2023 2:36:00 AM

Kim, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, appreciate. It was hard to get over the death of my dad, but I did somehow and use that emotion of grief in my poetry.