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I waited for the midnight train on the platform in the rain. It was windy, it was bitter cold and i was feeling bit frail and old. Patiently i awaited the arrival of my niece who was coming home from Greece. I had time to wander down memory lane where images flashed wearily in my brain: she was days old when I held her in my arms she's become a young lady with uncanny charms posted on April 9, 2025

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Date: 4/9/2025 10:32:00 PM
May I offer this: The images that flashed before you flooded -- in a good way -- my mind. Thanks, Line
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Date: 4/10/2025 2:42:00 AM
Thanks, Gershon ~

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