Time Passes

Enjoyed reading today...well done!

Kimberly. This is absolutely wonderful and so clever.I love everything about it.And you've covered it all, the stages of life,with such simplicity and yet a certain charm.As you say finally when we are older what is left is time.But so precious,to enjoy things, value the real things of life.And to learn things about ourselves when the stresses and strains of working life are gone.As you say in tranquility.Beautiful. thank you Love June

YEs, you showed well the progression. I think this form is best for showing progressions like this. Good one! LUv, andrea

Excellent use of this form, Kimberly and the progression of our lives ... smile ... thanks so much for your recent comment on my writing and hope you return to the Soup with more of yours!! Been quite awhile since you've posted a new poem ... and I look forward to seeing lots more from you !!

Brilliant~!

Reminds me of two old sayings... 'Youth is wasted on the young' and 'I wish I knew then what I know now'...Very wise and insightful poem, Kimberly, and thanks for your kind comments and support - Tim

Wow, this is true. beautiful write. and thank you for your kind comments. -Always LYnette

Interesting form, Kimberly. Very well written and profound! Keep writing! Gert

Best wishes in the contest Kimberly.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome comments.

This is a very lovely read in form, imagery, tone and flow. It is indeed a pleasure to have read for you :-) Thank you for your comments on "I've Crossed That Bridge Before" Good Luck in the contest my friend. God Bless, Always, Adell

This is a real beauty, Kimberly. i haven't had the courage to try one yet. Enjoyed. Robert

Excellent entry for the new contest.. What the Hex.. a great use of words to describe the time span in a woman's life.. good luck Kimberly.. such entertaining words... luv.. Linda-Marie

I think you did geat with this form, Kimberly. Time certainly passes (that was my theme too!) I very much enjoyed this one. Luv, Andrea

How well you describe this woman and the beauty that remains in her heart, even in her golden years. Lovely writing, Kimberly! Love, carolyn

wisely written, enjlyed reading

A whole life explained in so few words! Excellent

I like this one. If only we could have the wisdom of age and the beauty of the young, then, wow, Im sure we would all make a lot of different choices in our lives. Thanks for your comment. Take care.

excellent poem, and thank you for your comment. it did feel very relieving :) ------Ell

Time passes with it comes wisdom to be the best that we can be. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Love that journey to tranquility--not enough of that in this fast paced world. You have me smiling with this one. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen

Wonderful entry for the contest, Kimberly!! I wish you good luck and I'm going to try this! Wish me luck too! LOL! Thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Peace, love, Audrey