Time Or Space

You look at me 
From across the room
My heart lights up.

I can see from within your eyes
You would catch me  if  ever 
 I would think to fall.

You fill my heart like no other
When you touch me 
You take my cares away.

When I look into your eyes
I see my hopes and dreams
 come alive.

I know this to be true
I feel it in my soul.

I know we will never part
When you love me 
You take me there

To where there is 
No time or space.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/20/2017 7:02:00 PM
Love is a powerful force to be able to do what you describe. How sweet you are my friend. This is a gift.
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Date: 12/28/2012 1:09:00 PM
Debbie, congratulations with your poem featured on this awesome endings week of 2012. Wishing you the best of 2013 to come... luv * Linda
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 12/28/2012 6:20:00 PM
I thank you P. D. ;} Happy New Year to you,, blessings for the new year ;}
Date: 11/29/2010 11:17:00 AM
May your week bring you good health,may your heart overflow with love, and may your life bring you amazing inspiration to continue your writing. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and thank you for sharing it Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2010 1:46:00 AM
How lucky you are to share this type of endless love with someone special, Debbie! Really enjoyed the upbeat spirit in this poem. Peace and blessings, Carolyn
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