Time no longer exists

I walk the beach alone
I draw the contour of your face
~ it simply gets washed away



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 1st place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 4:39 PM
poignant and touching
Gauthier Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 9:05 PM
Thanks, Sara ~ have a lovely day
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 12:28 PM
Wow! Poignant and touching. Love the imagery!
Gauthier Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 3:01 PM
thank you very much, Kim ~
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