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Time, Love, and Loss

He loves her. His love for her never ends. “Love is patient, love is kind.” The good book says. Time.. It is your best friend if you think about it. It is also your worst enemy; It shows no mercy nor welcomes your white flag. The sinister disguise of Death and his pale green horse, Hung in offices, homes, and churches. 12:08 pm.. Tears paint his face and the rain befriends him. 12:35 pm.. Hugs, kisses, and condolences: “Love never dies.” “Love lasts for eternity.” “She will always live in you.” I don’t respond; I lack the strength. I have crafted up a bronze statue in my heart. Forever will my love be for her. Forever will I be her keepsake. The consequence of love is not a tragedy as I once believed. The tragedy is not understanding what love is. The tragedy is not being loved. My heart is now the way it should be.

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Date: 4/20/2016 2:57:00 AM
phillip chong,, nicely done. Glad to read your poem today. XoX *Linda*"
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Date: 4/15/2009 10:35:00 AM
Conrats on your feature Phillip, great work...Raul
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Date: 4/14/2009 2:06:00 PM
Aaahh, Love can be wonderful and painful at the same time. And you have shown in you poem. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week.
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Date: 4/13/2009 3:53:00 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/13/2009 2:13:00 PM
Great write-Very sad-Congradulations on being featuered-fellow souper RKay-am putting you under my favorite poets-I am looking forward to reading more of your poems....
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Date: 4/13/2009 11:57:00 AM
So sad. Congrats on a well deserved featured write. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/13/2009 11:49:00 AM
Hi Phillip, Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Keep on sharing your gift. Ernilando
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Date: 4/13/2009 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured in the future. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2009 5:26:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week, great, yet sad write....Aleera
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