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Time Loop

It's like I’m looking at myself in the third person
Unable to live
Unable to talk
A zombie walking around
Trying to live like I used to
Trying to pretend that I’m fine
But a war zone commentates my brain
I smile and the whole deepens inside my heart
Like a hurricane twirling 
I can’t even focus
Or remember things
Part of me went with you
And my mind can’t understand
I’m trying but each day reverses
And it makes less sense
A time loop

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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