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Time Loop

It's like I’m looking at myself in the third person Unable to live Unable to talk A zombie walking around Trying to live like I used to Trying to pretend that I’m fine But a war zone commentates my brain I smile and the whole deepens inside my heart Like a hurricane twirling I can’t even focus Or remember things Part of me went with you And my mind can’t understand I’m trying but each day reverses And it makes less sense A time loop

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