Time Left

When one heart did stop the love that two did share
An Eternity it does seem for the one left to bare 
So intertwined the love that should have lasted a life time
Entangled in emotions and sorrow is the one left behind
Dark though day the one that is left does have to pay
Do, want not, cannot replace the love that has passed away
It will stay dark even when day until I join you in the grave

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Date: 2/19/2020 12:33:00 PM
Thanks for the comment on this poem Cay Cay it is spot on. I to am glad I'm not living it and glad I do not have any memory of this kinda pain we all suffer at one time or another. Nice to see you are still writing poetry.
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Date: 2/19/2020 12:40:00 PM
Thanks for thee comment on this poem, Cay Cay, it is spot on. I to am glad I'm not living it and glad I have not encountered this kinda pain we all suffer at one time or another. Nice to see you are still writing poetry.
Date: 2/18/2020 6:27:00 PM
Unrequited love is intensely painful and you effectively emphasized its duration and devastation. Glad I am to remember it rather than be living it. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 2/19/2020 12:44:00 PM
Thanks for the comment on this poem, Cay Cay, it is spot on. I to am glad I'm not living it and glad I have not encountered this kinda pain we all suffer at one time or another. Nice to see you are still writing poetry.
Date: 1/10/2020 7:59:00 PM
I really like this one, and I see it got HM in some contest. For me, it's better than an HM . Well, congratulations anyway!
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Michael Craig
Date: 1/12/2020 12:07:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words and saying it is better than an HM. - Andrea
Date: 1/10/2020 7:07:00 AM
Congrats on your HM!;)
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Michael Craig
Date: 1/12/2020 12:08:00 PM
Thanks for the congratulations. - Brenda
Date: 1/8/2020 5:29:00 PM
Poignantly penned, Michael. Sigh. To eternity... ~ Gershon
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Date: 1/12/2020 12:09:00 PM
Thanks for the commit. - Gershon
Date: 1/1/2020 6:56:00 PM
It is a wonderful thing when two hearts become one but the loss of one can be unbearable. Lovely poem my friend.
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Michael Craig
Date: 1/8/2020 3:29:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words and for reading my work. Thanks for calling it lovely.
Date: 1/1/2020 5:52:00 PM
Ah, so poetical and beautiful; and true of so many.
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Michael Craig
Date: 1/8/2020 3:32:00 PM
Referring to my poem as poetical and beautiful is a great honor you bestowed upon me. Thanks Caren
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