Time Left

When one heart did stop the love that two did share
An Eternity it does seem for the one left to bare 
So intertwined the love that should have lasted a life time
Entangled in emotions and sorrow is the one left behind
Dark though day the one that is left does have to pay
Do, want not, cannot replace the love that has passed away
It will stay dark even when day until I join you in the grave
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Craig Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 12:33 PM
Thanks for the comment on this poem Cay Cay it is spot on. I to am glad I'm not living it and glad I do not have any memory of this kinda pain we all suffer at one time or another. Nice to see you are still writing poetry.
Craig Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 12:40 PM
Thanks for thee comment on this poem, Cay Cay, it is spot on. I to am glad I'm not living it and glad I have not encountered this kinda pain we all suffer at one time or another. Nice to see you are still writing poetry.
Godwin Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 6:27 PM
Unrequited love is intensely painful and you effectively emphasized its duration and devastation. Glad I am to remember it rather than be living it. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Craig Avatar
February 19, 2020 at 12:44 PM
Thanks for the comment on this poem, Cay Cay, it is spot on. I to am glad I'm not living it and glad I have not encountered this kinda pain we all suffer at one time or another. Nice to see you are still writing poetry.
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 7:59 PM
I really like this one, and I see it got HM in some contest. For me, it's better than an HM . Well, congratulations anyway!
Craig Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 12:07 PM
Thank you for your kind words and saying it is better than an HM. - Andrea
Chiri Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 7:07 AM
Congrats on your HM!;)
Craig Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 12:08 PM
Thanks for the congratulations. - Brenda
Wolf Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 5:29 PM
Poignantly penned, Michael. Sigh. To eternity... ~ Gershon
Craig Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 12:09 PM
Thanks for the commit. - Gershon
Mchattie Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 6:56 PM
It is a wonderful thing when two hearts become one but the loss of one can be unbearable. Lovely poem my friend.
Craig Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 3:29 PM
Thank you for the kind words and for reading my work. Thanks for calling it lovely.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 5:52 PM
Ah, so poetical and beautiful; and true of so many.
Craig Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 3:32 PM
Referring to my poem as poetical and beautiful is a great honor you bestowed upon me. Thanks Caren
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