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Time Is Ticking

why? why do we always think we have more time? as if the ticking pounding at our door went silent... for just a few seconds... we thought we had all the time in the world but the ticking got louder, and louder more violent every slam of their fist on love's door and one day... the ticking stopped the door caved in and our time ran out the part that hurts the most is that i thought we pull our universes and collide them into one... together... ~5-6-18~

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Date: 6/13/2018 12:49:00 AM
I hope that we do pull our universes and collide them into one, together.
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Pailey Gordon
Date: 6/13/2018 12:48:00 PM
Thank you for the multiple comments Caren!! You are so sweet! It really helps me believe in what I love to do! I'm 15 so it's hard to find people my age with the same or interest or even care so I always thought my writing wasn't the best but when I started this site it really helped me believe in myself :)
Date: 5/8/2018 10:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Pailey. A most fascinating and universal concern.
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Pailey Gordon
Date: 5/9/2018 10:19:00 AM
Thank you Line for always commenting such nice things on my writings :)
Date: 5/8/2018 10:13:00 PM
Congratulations, Pailey, on your wonderful win with your beautifully sad poem..
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Pailey Gordon
Date: 5/9/2018 10:18:00 AM
Thank you for taking time to read my writing Susan!
Date: 5/8/2018 8:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this sad, emotive poem. Well written.
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Pailey Gordon
Date: 5/9/2018 10:16:00 AM
Thank you Susan
Date: 5/8/2018 6:36:00 AM
Emotional write! Congrats!
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Pailey Gordon
Date: 5/9/2018 10:16:00 AM
Thank you Kim!

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